Tenderness

Together
I desire your heart
In my life
Sanity
There’s so much I need from you
Caring tenderness

Russell Sivey

Form: Shadorma 3/5/3/3/7/5
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Mister Roboto Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 9:34 PM
You work these forms effortlessly! There is Nothing I have read by you that bothers me. Your comment are "Caring and Tender" as well
Falotico Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 3:38 PM
Wonderful sentiment. Worded from a deep heart. Michael
Yamin Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 1:17 PM
I enjoyed this charming poem Russel. Thanks for sharing. -Mohammad
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