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Tenderly

A SENSUAL approach UNSEALS the door to her heart.

Her cheeks turn red as warmth flows in.
His fingers play upon her skin.

Titillating ... teasing ... they take their time.

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Anagram~Couplet~Alliteration
18 th December 2015
Contest: 4 Lines
Sponsor: Silent One
placed 2nd

Copyright © Paul Callus | Year Posted 2015

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March 24, 2016 at 11:15 AM

You should have seen my face right now. After reading this poem, i feel so inspired... Maybe i should write a rromanticccc... Poem before i go back to sleep... 100/100!

March 25, 2016 at 1:27 PM

Thank you Red...you and your comments are gorgeous:) I hope you did write that poem...something to look forward to! hugs // paul

February 19, 2016 at 10:15 PM

Wow .... another good one! I love how simple this is and yet leaves a big impact. You leave me in the spot where I'm wanting more, yet at the same time enjoy the mystery of staying put. Excellent!

February 20, 2016 at 9:01 AM

Glad you liked this...the result of S1's contest! My writing is never wrapped in complexity; I like the simple life, something also reflected in most of my poems. Thank you for finding time to read and comment:) Regards // paul

Charmaine Chircop

December 24, 2015 at 6:40 AM

So so beautiful ..bleeding from a passionate maltese heart..Lovely. Il-milied u sena t-tajba mill-qalb .

December 24, 2015 at 9:02 AM

Thank you, Charm...love your feedback:) Xewqat sbieh lilek u lil dawk kollha li huma gheziez ghalik. God bless! ~*~ paul

December 23, 2015 at 11:54 AM

A passionate and sensual write.. a 7 +

December 23, 2015 at 1:17 PM

Thank you for the high rating, and most of all for stopping by to read and comment, Nadiya:) ~ Regards // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

December 22, 2015 at 2:01 AM

Lovely write n win Paul.. brilliant alliteration.. big congrats!

December 22, 2015 at 3:41 PM

So pleased that you liked it, Upma:) Thank you for reading and commenting, my friend. Regards *~*~* paul

December 21, 2015 at 11:38 AM

A 7-plus for sure! Paul, I really like this lovely, appealing poem. Janice

December 21, 2015 at 4:29 PM

Thank you, Janice; the lovely comments and high rating are both appreciated. Regards & blessed festive wishes! ~ paul

Pandita Sietesantos

December 21, 2015 at 10:55 AM

This is so lovely! The Alliteration is absolutely sensuous! I love it, Paul! Congratulations on your great win and I am honoured to share this spot with you! Pandita

December 21, 2015 at 4:27 PM

The pleasure is mine, Pandita. I have long admired your written words! Thank you for the lovely feedback. May Christmas bring you Joy and Blessings:) ~ Warm regards // paul

December 21, 2015 at 7:27 AM

Congratulations Paul on your 2nd place win. Simply sensual.

December 21, 2015 at 4:25 PM

So pleased that you like it, Susan. Thank you. Wishing you warm season's greetings:) Regards ~~ paul

December 21, 2015 at 6:56 AM

Nice win Paul a warm experience for sure congratulations!

December 21, 2015 at 4:23 PM

Thank you, Michael; what I write usually is not what I have in mind when I start...my pen has a will of its own:) ~ Regards // paul

December 20, 2015 at 9:38 PM

Yes Paul, the hands of a master playing the pliable instrument of the soul

December 21, 2015 at 4:22 PM

You are kind and generous, John. Thank you for a lovely poetic comment! Wishing you all the best~~ paul

December 20, 2015 at 8:31 PM

VERY nice, Paul. I love this too! Congratulations on your nice win. Sandra

December 21, 2015 at 4:20 PM

Thank you, Sandra. I must thank you for all the lovely visits and support which you have offered during these past months:) God bless. ~ Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

December 20, 2015 at 7:23 PM

wow, I LOVE this one, Paul. Whoooo hooo. Congratulations.

December 21, 2015 at 4:18 PM

Your reaction is sweet ambrosia, Andrea:) Thank you! Your winning entry was unbeatable! ~ Sweet regards // paul

December 20, 2015 at 7:06 PM

Paul, stopped by to enjoy some of my favorite and best poets of 2010 - 1015 once again :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~

December 21, 2015 at 4:00 PM

Thank you for coming back with a smile and lovely warm wishes, Skat:) I also wish you and your loved ones a Joyous Christmas, and may the new year be full of blessings! ~ Regards & hugs // paul

Beautiful Scars

December 20, 2015 at 6:29 PM

Popping in to tell you congrats, I knew it was a winner!! *smiles*

December 21, 2015 at 3:57 PM

Thank you Laura! I rely on your judgment, and appreciate the *smiles*:) ~ Wishing you all the very best:))) ~~~ paul

December 20, 2015 at 5:50 PM

A sensual write done with ease! Congrats and Merry X'mas to you and your family!

December 21, 2015 at 3:54 PM

Enjoyed your lovely feedback, Balveen:) ~ May I also wish you and your loved ones a Joyous & Blessed Christmas, and all the best for the new year! ~ Regards // paul

Poet Destroyer A

December 20, 2015 at 4:44 PM

paul, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

December 21, 2015 at 3:38 PM

Thank you, Linda:) It is lovely to have you knocking at my door; your visits have been missed. Wishing you all the best. hugs // paul

December 20, 2015 at 4:31 PM

Oh, I do love this! Yours is the first I've read written by a man and certainly the most sensually unsealing write out of all of them. I'm being silly, but serious about delighting in your poem. I thought it most worthy ... 7 ... CayCay OH-Congratulations OH - Yes, Merry Christmas, Paul. I wish only joy for you and your loved ones during the Holidays and always.

December 21, 2015 at 3:28 PM

There are about 8 male winners in this contest...not enough to balance the female ones:) Thank you CayCay for your pleasant remarks and high rating. ~ May you and your loved ones have a joyous and blessed Christmas!:) ~ Regards *** paul

December 20, 2015 at 11:48 AM

Very nicely done Paul, congrats with your well deserved win!

December 21, 2015 at 3:52 PM

Thank you, John. You did quite well yourself:) Regards // paul

December 20, 2015 at 11:22 AM

PAUL, Congratulations on your "4 line" win. WUV **SKAT Doodle** :)

December 21, 2015 at 3:40 PM

Thank you Skat...you know you're always welcome:) Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 19, 2015 at 11:37 AM

- A "hot" game :) - Luck in contest - I wish you and your family a peaceful and beautiful Christmas, Paul :) - Christmas hugs // Anne-Lise :)

December 19, 2015 at 12:48 PM

Thank you very much, Anne Lise! May you and your family have a blessed and happy Christmas. Also best wishes for 2016:) # Hugs // paul

Richard Lamoureux

December 19, 2015 at 9:42 AM

A sexy one! Merry Christmas to you Paul.

December 19, 2015 at 12:44 PM

Thank you Richard. All the best wishes to you and your loved ones...may you have a joyous and blessed Christmas...Regards // paul

December 18, 2015 at 10:26 PM

Is this Eileen? kidding, great write!!!!! you both have such great style!

Eileen Manassian

December 19, 2015 at 9:11 AM

:)

December 19, 2015 at 9:09 AM

Thank you Arthur:) Eileen is on a level of her own...hard to emulate! ~ Wishing you all the best for this festive season! // paul

Beautiful Scars

December 18, 2015 at 9:28 PM

*love* this Paul! Great entry for the contest..7777! Be blessed as always -luloo *smiles*

December 19, 2015 at 8:12 AM

So pleased that you like it, Laura; thank you, especially for the high rating:) Blessings to you, too:) ~ All the best. // paul

Eileen Manassian

December 18, 2015 at 6:11 PM

PAUL CALLUS!!! You have written a masterpiece! Good luck in the contest....oh me oh my....such a lovely beautiful piece...Sensual wins again. Hugs

Eileen Manassian

December 19, 2015 at 9:12 AM

It's good to be back, dear. I'm better now.....Hugs

December 19, 2015 at 8:09 AM

Thank you Eileen:))))) I would say it is sensually flirty, but restrained! The whole write was dictated by the initial Anagram. It is lovely to have you back, and active:) Hugs // paul

Beautiful Scars

December 18, 2015 at 4:33 PM

Perfect Paul! Good luck in the contest, you will do great :)-luloo *smiles*

December 18, 2015 at 5:34 PM

You are very optimistic, Laura:) Thank you for the encouragement! ~ Regards // paul

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