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Edna St. Vincent Millay
Tenderly, in those times
 

XII

Tenderly, in those times, as though she fed
An ailing child—with sturdy propping up
Of its small, feverish body in the bed,
And steadying of its hands about the cup—
She gave her husband of her body’s strength,
Thinking of men, what helpless things they were,
Until he turned and fell asleep at length,
And stealthily stirred the night and spoke to her.
Familiar, at such moments, like a friend,
Whistled far off the long, mysterious train,
And she could see in her mind’s vision plain
The magic World, where cities stood on end . . .
Remote from where she lay—and yet—between,
Save for something asleep beside her, only the window screen

Tenderly

Edna St. Vincent Millay
Tenderly, in those times
From the wan dream
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XII

Tenderly, ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ sturdy propping up
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦ feverish body in the bed,
And steadying of its hands about the cup—
She gave her husband of her body’s strength,
¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦
Until he turned and fell asleep at length,
And stealthily stirred the night ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦
Familiar, at such moments, ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦
Whistled far off the long, mysterious train,
And she could see in her mind’s vision ¦¦¦¦¦
The magic World, ¦¦¦¦¦ cities ¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ . . .
Remote from where she lay—and yet—between,
¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ only the window screen


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Griffiths Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 9:23 AM
I love blackout poetry! How did you get the blackout boxes on this website?
Kendrick Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 4:09 PM
Terry, it is on homepage and you can follow the directions on that page. I hope you get it worked out so you can use it. Sara K. ⭐
Onclaud Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 9:02 PM
ohh, i am enthralled by your eloquent work even if blackout poetry is new to me, sara...
Kendrick Avatar
July 22, 2026 at 4:30 AM
Nette, it is new to me as well. I have enjoyed doing some once I got the feel of it. Thanks for the visit. Sara K.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 8:10 PM
Well created black out.
Kendrick Avatar
July 22, 2026 at 4:29 AM
I appreciate the nice review, Alison. Your visit was enjoyable. Sara K.
Dietrich Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 3:00 PM
You chose a beautiful poem and poetess from history to draw from in creating your blackout poem. Great job, Sara
Kendrick Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 3:15 PM
Why, thank you, Andrea. I have enjoyed reading her works over the last few years. Sara K.
Anaya Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 1:22 PM
Oh yes, it looks right to me, now I understand what blocking is all about. Nice job! It's a fun form to do~
Kendrick Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 2:17 PM
Glad you understand it now, Anaya. Click on your homepage with the picture of a house above and on home page it is in a group of items called games and just click on block out and go for it. Sara K.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 12:48 PM
Your, "Tenderly" is a creative write. Love It... "Good Luck" if for a contest. This seems to be the big New thing out for writers. I took a class on it. We used old magazines. Have a fun day writing away.............
Kendrick Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 2:15 PM
Oh!! Paula, so you took a class on block out poetry. Not very much going on around here lately. thank you for dropping by. Sara K.
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