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Tender Thinking

Your nose bled last night, suddenly, without reason except for the blood thinners you're on, but then you are almost ninety-three. I worried about you, my historical, fun loving father, though we laughed when I said, "You'd better not die before your book launch," and you asked, "Can I die after?" Still we put our joking away when we heard the little girl inside me begging, "Please don't die, Daddy and leave me an orphan, please, please, please, although I'm sixty-three."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/23/2011 4:00:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Christina. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Christina Cowling
Date: 5/23/2011 6:01:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome, Carol, I will be reading and commenting on other poetry. It is a delight to be here and so warmly welcomed. I will be finding my way around. Right now I'm in the throws of planning a launch for my father's book-"My Life's Journey," Blessings, Christy
Date: 5/22/2011 6:50:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your amazing creative poetry tonight.. hope u enjoy your time on the site as u share with luv..
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Christina Cowling
Date: 5/23/2011 6:02:00 AM
Glad you liked the poem and nice of you to reply to it. Christy
Date: 5/22/2011 6:21:00 PM
Sorry forgot to rate
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Christina Cowling
Date: 5/23/2011 6:04:00 AM
If you have time, please do, I'd like to see how you rate and have no problem with that. Christy
Date: 5/22/2011 5:59:00 PM
Sad and sweet all in the same read. Thanks for sharing. ~Beloved
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Christina Cowling
Date: 5/23/2011 6:05:00 AM
and thank you for replying, Faizah. Christy

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