Aditi Mishra Poet Rhyme

Tender Longing

       Exploding ecstasy of an embellished petal springs,
   
                peeping through rivulets in reaping wisps of desire;
 
          to a moonlit bridge, my whispering red leaf clings--
 
                       longing to strum tender strings in autumn's bonfire.


August 7, 2020

Submitted for Rithimus Divisa 4 Poetry Contest
Sponsor:  Gregory R Barden

*This Rithimus Divisa is taken from the poem "Autumn Whispers" 
Written on August 6, 2020
Submitted for Nature Rhyming Poetry Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Brenda Chiri*

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Paghunda Zahid September 2, 2020 at 7:20 PM Congratulations on your placement

Jeanne Mcgee August 30, 2020 at 6:01 PM Congrats on your top placement. Beautiful.

Andrea Dietrich August 30, 2020 at 2:03 PM simply gorgeous, Aditi. Congrats on a well deserved top honor.

Beata Agustin August 30, 2020 at 4:36 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Sigrid Ermine August 29, 2020 at 4:16 PM Incredible and as always, superb imagery, Aditi. I would love to be in this scene. It bends my mind! Congratulations on top Win in small list.

Greg Gaul August 28, 2020 at 6:22 PM Lovely rhyming Aditi. Congratulations on your fine placement.

Jenna Logan August 28, 2020 at 5:56 PM Congratulations on your poem being honored, Aditi.

John Watt August 28, 2020 at 5:25 PM Excellent depiction of nature, Aditi. I congratulate you on your win with Greg ~ John

Regina Mcintosh August 28, 2020 at 5:22 PM Congrats to you, dear friend. God bless you always :)

John Hamilton August 28, 2020 at 5:07 PM Congrats Aditi for another win, this time in Greg's contest!

Regina Mcintosh August 9, 2020 at 4:50 AM Beautiful poem, dear friend. I enjoyed it and wish you a win. God bless you

Caren Krutsinger August 8, 2020 at 9:16 PM The word choices are exquisite my friend, as usual.

Evelyn Judy Buehler August 8, 2020 at 8:52 PM Exploding ecstasy...very lovely words comprise this delightful verse, Aditi. :)

Andrea Dietrich August 8, 2020 at 3:49 PM this is a beauty, Aditi.

Frederic Parker August 8, 2020 at 12:46 PM I now have to read the poem from which these marvelous lines have come