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Tender Longing

Exploding ecstasy of an embellished petal springs, peeping through rivulets in reaping wisps of desire; to a moonlit bridge, my whispering red leaf clings-- longing to strum tender strings in autumn's bonfire. August 7, 2020 Submitted for Rithimus Divisa 4 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Gregory R Barden *This Rithimus Divisa is taken from the poem "Autumn Whispers" Written on August 6, 2020 Submitted for Nature Rhyming Poetry Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brenda Chiri*

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Date: 9/2/2020 7:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement
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Date: 8/30/2020 6:01:00 PM
Congrats on your top placement. Beautiful.
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Date: 8/30/2020 2:03:00 PM
simply gorgeous, Aditi. Congrats on a well deserved top honor.
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Date: 8/30/2020 4:36:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 8/29/2020 4:16:00 PM
Incredible and as always, superb imagery, Aditi. I would love to be in this scene. It bends my mind! Congratulations on top Win in small list.
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Date: 8/28/2020 6:22:00 PM
Lovely rhyming Aditi. Congratulations on your fine placement.
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Date: 8/28/2020 5:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being honored, Aditi.
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Date: 8/28/2020 5:25:00 PM
Excellent depiction of nature, Aditi. I congratulate you on your win with Greg ~ John
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Date: 8/28/2020 5:22:00 PM
Congrats to you, dear friend. God bless you always :)
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Date: 8/28/2020 5:07:00 PM
Congrats Aditi for another win, this time in Greg's contest!
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Date: 8/9/2020 4:50:00 AM
Beautiful poem, dear friend. I enjoyed it and wish you a win. God bless you
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Date: 8/8/2020 9:16:00 PM
The word choices are exquisite my friend, as usual.
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Date: 8/8/2020 8:52:00 PM
Exploding ecstasy...very lovely words comprise this delightful verse, Aditi. :)
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Date: 8/8/2020 3:49:00 PM
this is a beauty, Aditi.
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Date: 8/8/2020 12:46:00 PM
I now have to read the poem from which these marvelous lines have come
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