Ten Reps of Ten

ten reps of ten,
here I go again.
Today I work on my biceps,
triceps,
I feel great.

Ten reps of ten,
sweat soaking my beater.
Nobody to lend a hand,
all this weight, 
I can,
do my ten reps of ten..

Jared Pickett	
10/3/09	
Asavvy1
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 2:12 PM
Kool piece Jared, made me tired reading it, and thats without exercising >> James
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December 6, 2009 at 4:40 AM
I am about to get ready to go to the gym lol
Devonshire Avatar
December 5, 2009 at 10:31 PM
You've got me convinced it's time to work out, Jared! Very inspiring for a somewhat laid-back reader whose typing fingers get the most exercise. Great work! Love, Carolyn
Culverhouse Avatar
December 5, 2009 at 8:28 AM
You make me feel like a lazy bone, but nice poem! enjoyed reading.
Sweetheart Avatar
December 5, 2009 at 5:45 AM
Soup Mail 4 U ... Rep Man... "Sweetheart"
Canady Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 4:49 PM
Excellent ... (Are You The Guy On The Bo-Flex ?) Smile For The Ladies Jared .... But Truthfully ... After The Eating, Comes The Sweating to get back to feeeeeling Great ... Nice One, Hon ... MoonBee
Kendrick Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 12:25 PM
Glad that you got the excercise in for today. I don't want you to get unheathly. Keep the magical pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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December 4, 2009 at 8:35 AM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Jared. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love and compassion for others. Inspiration is waiting for you grab it and write. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Like L-MB tribute to you today Jared.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
Moreno Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 9:59 PM
Nice work Jared, staying in shape is good for the heart and soul...Raul
Owens Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 6:31 PM
Enjoyed reading...I like the treadmill, swimming pool, and the sauna...lol...Marty
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December 3, 2009 at 3:07 PM
You,re gonnsa grow up a six pack:).beauty is in the heart and Soul..JAR,.and this poem gave me a chuckle.Is Conseulo your instructress?:)Charma
Gumbo Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 11:10 AM
nice :)
Delacroix Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 10:54 AM
LOL! Very funny. Keep up the good work (out)! Thank you for your great comment on my narrative. Be well, Caroline.
Meade Stephenson Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 10:45 AM
Another great write here Jared....ugh exercise ..lol!! Thanks for sharing! ~Mary
Hill Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 10:07 AM
Ten reps of ten, let the workout begin....great job Jared...TAH
Sweetheart Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 9:56 AM
Check your Yahoo.. "Sweetie" luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 9:30 AM
Response to recent Soup Mail.. call... luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 9:09 AM
I could play some music for your workout if that would help u... Soup Mail.. call.. great poem.. just finished my biking for the day... in house standard, of course... too cold for me out there .. I am a Summer baby..luv..."Sweetie"
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December 3, 2009 at 9:09 AM
Drop down and give me 20... Great write Son.. Tomorrow better be 20 reps of 20.. Love Dad
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