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Ten Reps of Ten

ten reps of ten,
here I go again.
Today I work on my biceps,
triceps,
I feel great.

Ten reps of ten,
sweat soaking my beater.
Nobody to lend a hand,
all this weight, 
I can,
do my ten reps of ten..

Jared Pickett	
10/3/09	
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Copyright © Jared Pickett | Year Posted 2009

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James Fraser Date: 12/15/2009 2:12:00 PM Kool piece Jared, made me tired reading it, and thats without exercising >> James Login to Reply

Steve Malebranche Date: 12/6/2009 4:40:00 AM I am about to get ready to go to the gym lol Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 12/5/2009 10:31:00 PM You've got me convinced it's time to work out, Jared! Very inspiring for a somewhat laid-back reader whose typing fingers get the most exercise. Great work! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 12/5/2009 8:28:00 AM You make me feel like a lazy bone, but nice poem! enjoyed reading. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 12/5/2009 5:45:00 AM Soup Mail 4 U ... Rep Man... "Sweetheart" Login to Reply

Moonbee Canady Date: 12/4/2009 4:49:00 PM Excellent ... (Are You The Guy On The Bo-Flex ?) Smile For The Ladies Jared .... But Truthfully ... After The Eating, Comes The Sweating to get back to feeeeeling Great ... Nice One, Hon ... MoonBee Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/4/2009 12:25:00 PM Glad that you got the excercise in for today. I don't want you to get unheathly. Keep the magical pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 12/4/2009 8:35:00 AM I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Jared. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love and compassion for others. Inspiration is waiting for you grab it and write. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 12/4/2009 12:00:00 AM Like L-MB tribute to you today Jared.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 12/3/2009 9:59:00 PM Nice work Jared, staying in shape is good for the heart and soul...Raul Login to Reply

Marty Owens Date: 12/3/2009 6:31:00 PM Enjoyed reading...I like the treadmill, swimming pool, and the sauna...lol...Marty Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 12/3/2009 3:07:00 PM You,re gonnsa grow up a six pack:).beauty is in the heart and Soul..JAR,.and this poem gave me a chuckle.Is Conseulo your instructress?:)Charma Login to Reply

Izzy Gumbo Date: 12/3/2009 11:10:00 AM nice :) Login to Reply

Caroline Cécile Delacroix Date: 12/3/2009 10:54:00 AM LOL! Very funny. Keep up the good work (out)! Thank you for your great comment on my narrative. Be well, Caroline. Login to Reply

Mary Meade Stephenson Date: 12/3/2009 10:45:00 AM Another great write here Jared....ugh exercise ..lol!! Thanks for sharing! ~Mary Login to Reply

Tobey Hill Date: 12/3/2009 10:07:00 AM Ten reps of ten, let the workout begin....great job Jared...TAH Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 12/3/2009 9:56:00 AM Check your Yahoo.. "Sweetie" luv.. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 12/3/2009 9:30:00 AM Response to recent Soup Mail.. call... luv.. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 12/3/2009 9:09:00 AM I could play some music for your workout if that would help u... Soup Mail.. call.. great poem.. just finished my biking for the day... in house standard, of course... too cold for me out there .. I am a Summer baby..luv..."Sweetie" Login to Reply

Richard Pickett Date: 12/3/2009 9:09:00 AM Drop down and give me 20... Great write Son.. Tomorrow better be 20 reps of 20.. Love Dad Login to Reply