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Ten Outta Nine

He can't be real, so happy ALL the time Of course some days only ten outta nine That's downright silly Disturbs the tranquility Must control this extreme enthusiasm of mine

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Silent One

Date: 1/29/2018 6:14:00 AM

Aww always great to be happy or to appear to be happy.. We can not let the world defeat us... great limerick...

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/29/2018 7:07:00 AM

For the most part, I'm winning the battle... trying to be an example but not everybody thinks I'm for real!!! LOL

Judith S

Date: 1/28/2018 6:52:00 PM

I definitely appreciate your happiness and exuberance my friend ;)

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/28/2018 7:32:00 PM

Maybe a wee bit over the top for some... hey, as long as my dear Judy approves!!! YEE HAW!!! Love, Happy Jack xxx

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 1/28/2018 8:44:00 AM

You are a perfect ten, dressed to the rhymes!

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/28/2018 10:36:00 AM

Can I be your friend FOREVER??? xoxox

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 1/28/2018 8:25:00 AM

No sir, let it rip!//Your happiness is really a trip//puts the bum//on the glum//keeps us from jumping ship. SILLY ON SMILING SAM!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/28/2018 10:35:00 AM

Happy to hear you're still safely aboard ship Cap't Jonathan! HAVE A GREAT SUNSHINY ZONA DAY!!