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Ten Outta Nine

He can't be real, so happy ALL the time
Of course some days only ten outta nine
That's downright silly
Disturbs the tranquility
Must control this extreme enthusiasm of mine

Copyright © Jack Ellison | Year Posted 2018

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January 29, 2018 at 6:14 AM

Aww always great to be happy or to appear to be happy.. We can not let the world defeat us... great limerick...

January 29, 2018 at 7:07 AM

For the most part, I'm winning the battle... trying to be an example but not everybody thinks I'm for real!!! LOL

January 28, 2018 at 6:52 PM

I definitely appreciate your happiness and exuberance my friend ;)

January 28, 2018 at 7:32 PM

Maybe a wee bit over the top for some... hey, as long as my dear Judy approves!!! YEE HAW!!! Love, Happy Jack xxx

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January 28, 2018 at 8:44 AM

You are a perfect ten, dressed to the rhymes!

January 28, 2018 at 10:36 AM

Can I be your friend FOREVER??? xoxox

January 28, 2018 at 8:25 AM

No sir, let it rip!//Your happiness is really a trip//puts the bum//on the glum//keeps us from jumping ship. SILLY ON SMILING SAM!!!

January 28, 2018 at 10:35 AM

Happy to hear you're still safely aboard ship Cap't Jonathan! HAVE A GREAT SUNSHINY ZONA DAY!!

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