Ten Minutes Alone On a Treadmill

A distant rumble
Not thunder…a plane?
Remember when they broke
The sound barrier
Shook the house
Made the dog pee …right there
I think I hear the sun laugh
Y’know…that ha – ha
Its gonna rain for three days
You’re gonna miss me laugh
The moon just smiled
Its rocking chair smile
the baby ground hog
is fattening up nicely
the dandelions are away for the fourth
I think I’ll risk flying the flag
Y’know, that old tattered one
The Red, White, and Blue one
I got new windshield wipers
It probably won’t rain
Time’s up….

John G. Lawless
©6/23/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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August 7, 2023 at 5:35 PM
I find great resonance within these words, John. A captivating dialogue delving into divergent paths!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 11:20 AM
A creative/fun write. Maybe next time read a book on the treadmill. Hahaha... Have a great day/week............
Fisher Avatar
June 24, 2023 at 5:35 AM
A fun discourse on disparate courses!
Merryman Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 7:33 PM
John, I can certainly relate to this! My mind is always traveling, wandering down rabbit trails. An amusing write! Blessings, Kim M
Allison Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 4:22 PM
lol John , forget the treadmilll but If i sat on the loo for ten mins i wonder what images my brain would conjure up... on seconds thoughts .... hugs jan xx
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