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Ten Ballerina's

~*~ Ten Ballerina's~~fingers dance Across the keys~~entwining romance ~*~ For Rick Parise "The Piano" A Single CrystallinPlacement: 3rd

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Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 8/28/2011 10:55:00 AM

A strikingly clever performance! lol This Crystalline deserved a top placement in the winner's circle. Loved your witty write. CR

John Freeman

Date: 1/24/2011 10:14:00 AM

Paula, good to see in the top 3, "Congratulations!" Agape, Moses

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/16/2011 6:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your incredible win in Rick's Crystalline Contest, Paula! Love, Annalise

Liz Walsh

Date: 1/15/2011 4:33:00 AM

An exquisite description - Liz

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/14/2011 9:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Paula in ^Rick Parise's contest "The Piano". Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/12/2011 5:06:00 PM

very decorative and cute ..on point ;) I can see the fingers dancin' Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/12/2011 12:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your fantastic win in Rick's contest, Paula! Always, Annalise

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/11/2011 2:30:00 PM

Congratulations ...Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 1/11/2011 9:34:00 AM

This one is a very cute crystalline,Paula!Congrats on your well deserved big win!-kashinath

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/11/2011 9:12:00 AM

Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Paula

Nick Bagnall

Date: 1/11/2011 4:00:00 AM

I love the analogy, nicely thought out - congrats !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2011 9:59:00 PM

Congratulations, Paula. love the metaphor of the ballerinas!

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/10/2011 5:30:00 PM

Ahh...this is delightful !!! Congratulations on a well deserved win!!

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/10/2011 5:25:00 PM

congrats on your win Paula, it's a beautiful crystalline

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/10/2011 4:59:00 PM

Lovely image, Paula. Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/10/2011 4:57:00 PM

Congrats Paula on your wonderful win in Rick's Piano contest with this vibrant entry my friend.. enjoy your chart topping win tonight with luv...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/7/2011 7:02:00 AM

Fantastic and very apt images to bring about the magic of Piano music. Paula. Good luck in the contest. Soup Mail!!!

Fabiyas M V

Date: 1/7/2011 6:45:00 AM

Rhythmic thoughts flowing out sweetly,Paula.

Constance La France

Date: 1/7/2011 6:30:00 AM

Only one word can describe this crystalline "beautiful" ~~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/6/2011 10:41:00 PM

So beautiful, Paula and great imagery! thanks for your blog comment! Luv, Andrea

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/6/2011 9:14:00 PM

What a wonderful image Paula. All the very best for the contest.

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/6/2011 9:12:00 PM

love it, this is a wonderful crystalline

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/6/2011 8:07:00 PM

A beautiful vision in words Paula.. good luck in the new contest by Rick.. my entry is 'pianoforte' ... title is explained on poem.. lovely imagery...