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Ten Ballerina's

~*~ Ten Ballerina's~~fingers dance

                                   Across the keys~~entwining romance ~*~





For Rick Parise
"The Piano"
A Single CrystallinPlacement: 3rd

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Caryl Ramsdale

August 28, 2011 at 10:55 AM

A strikingly clever performance! lol This Crystalline deserved a top placement in the winner's circle. Loved your witty write. CR

John Freeman

January 24, 2011 at 10:14 AM

Paula, good to see in the top 3, "Congratulations!" Agape, Moses

Audrey Haick

January 16, 2011 at 6:40 PM

Congratulations on your incredible win in Rick's Crystalline Contest, Paula! Love, Annalise

Liz Walsh

January 15, 2011 at 4:33 AM

An exquisite description - Liz

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 14, 2011 at 9:57 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Paula in ^Rick Parise's contest "The Piano". Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

January 12, 2011 at 5:06 PM

very decorative and cute ..on point ;) I can see the fingers dancin' Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Audrey Haick

January 12, 2011 at 12:46 PM

Congratulations on your fantastic win in Rick's contest, Paula! Always, Annalise

Sara Kendrick

January 11, 2011 at 2:30 PM

Congratulations ...Sara

Kash Poet

January 11, 2011 at 9:34 AM

This one is a very cute crystalline,Paula!Congrats on your well deserved big win!-kashinath

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 11, 2011 at 9:12 AM

Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Paula

Nick Bagnall

January 11, 2011 at 4:00 AM

I love the analogy, nicely thought out - congrats !

Andrea Dietrich

January 10, 2011 at 9:59 PM

Congratulations, Paula. love the metaphor of the ballerinas!

Carrie Richards

January 10, 2011 at 5:30 PM

Ahh...this is delightful !!! Congratulations on a well deserved win!!

Francine Roberts

January 10, 2011 at 5:25 PM

congrats on your win Paula, it's a beautiful crystalline

Carolyn Devonshire

January 10, 2011 at 4:59 PM

Lovely image, Paula. Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 10, 2011 at 4:57 PM

Congrats Paula on your wonderful win in Rick's Piano contest with this vibrant entry my friend.. enjoy your chart topping win tonight with luv...

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 7, 2011 at 7:02 AM

Fantastic and very apt images to bring about the magic of Piano music. Paula. Good luck in the contest. Soup Mail!!!

Fabiyas M V

January 7, 2011 at 6:45 AM

Rhythmic thoughts flowing out sweetly,Paula.

Constance La France

January 7, 2011 at 6:30 AM

Only one word can describe this crystalline "beautiful" ~~

Andrea Dietrich

January 6, 2011 at 10:41 PM

So beautiful, Paula and great imagery! thanks for your blog comment! Luv, Andrea

Tahera Mannan

January 6, 2011 at 9:14 PM

What a wonderful image Paula. All the very best for the contest.

Francine Roberts

January 6, 2011 at 9:12 PM

love it, this is a wonderful crystalline

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 6, 2011 at 8:07 PM

A beautiful vision in words Paula.. good luck in the new contest by Rick.. my entry is 'pianoforte' ... title is explained on poem.. lovely imagery...

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