Ten Ballerina's

~*~ Ten Ballerina's~~fingers dance

                                   Across the keys~~entwining romance ~*~





For Rick Parise
"The Piano"
A Single CrystallinPlacement: 3rd

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/28/2011 10:55:00 AM
A strikingly clever performance! lol This Crystalline deserved a top placement in the winner's circle. Loved your witty write. CR
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Date: 1/24/2011 10:14:00 AM
Paula, good to see in the top 3, "Congratulations!" Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/16/2011 6:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your incredible win in Rick's Crystalline Contest, Paula! Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/15/2011 4:33:00 AM
An exquisite description - Liz
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Date: 1/14/2011 9:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Paula in ^Rick Parise's contest "The Piano". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/12/2011 5:06:00 PM
very decorative and cute ..on point ;) I can see the fingers dancin' Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/12/2011 12:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your fantastic win in Rick's contest, Paula! Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/11/2011 2:30:00 PM
Congratulations ...Sara
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Date: 1/11/2011 9:34:00 AM
This one is a very cute crystalline,Paula!Congrats on your well deserved big win!-kashinath
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Date: 1/11/2011 9:12:00 AM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Paula
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Date: 1/11/2011 4:00:00 AM
I love the analogy, nicely thought out - congrats !
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Date: 1/10/2011 9:59:00 PM
Congratulations, Paula. love the metaphor of the ballerinas!
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Date: 1/10/2011 5:30:00 PM
Ahh...this is delightful !!! Congratulations on a well deserved win!!
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Date: 1/10/2011 5:25:00 PM
congrats on your win Paula, it's a beautiful crystalline
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Date: 1/10/2011 4:59:00 PM
Lovely image, Paula. Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/10/2011 4:57:00 PM
Congrats Paula on your wonderful win in Rick's Piano contest with this vibrant entry my friend.. enjoy your chart topping win tonight with luv...
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Date: 1/7/2011 7:02:00 AM
Fantastic and very apt images to bring about the magic of Piano music. Paula. Good luck in the contest. Soup Mail!!!
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Date: 1/7/2011 6:45:00 AM
Rhythmic thoughts flowing out sweetly,Paula.
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Date: 1/7/2011 6:30:00 AM
Only one word can describe this crystalline "beautiful" ~~
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Date: 1/6/2011 10:41:00 PM
So beautiful, Paula and great imagery! thanks for your blog comment! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/6/2011 9:14:00 PM
What a wonderful image Paula. All the very best for the contest.
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Date: 1/6/2011 9:12:00 PM
love it, this is a wonderful crystalline
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Date: 1/6/2011 8:07:00 PM
A beautiful vision in words Paula.. good luck in the new contest by Rick.. my entry is 'pianoforte' ... title is explained on poem.. lovely imagery...
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