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Ten

Pain managed; not at T E N!
Nor at two, four, six a.m.

Not so much a squeeze
as a labor-like pain.

Intensity of calf cramp,
beyond imagination’s stretch.

Worthwhile epidural; we will see.
Something replaced the relief.

Invasive ivy wraps around my right.
Leg in turmoil; spoils of success.

Information relays that exercise
can exacerbate; cut me a break.

Steepled hands, then knuckle hug.
How can we manage to get it right?

God knows. God knows. Good…
all that ails me will be used for good,

but meanwhile it’s very bad. Sorry
for those who groan in suffering.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Wolf Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 8:40 PM
I see what's happening: You are getting all the yuck out of your system before vacation --- instead of during. ~ Vision (F)airy
Rodrigues Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 6:04 AM
That’s what I believe too…should be a great one…lol
Hind Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 4:51 PM
I am so sorry you are feeling that. Prayers and the best,
Rodrigues Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 4:55 AM
I truly appreciate your prayers, dear one!
Godwin Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 4:39 PM
I did a stint in pain management and absolutely despised the level of pain question. ACCORDING TO WHOSE PERSPECTIVE? There are pain wimps (mostly some men I've known) and non-wimps so ... I don't know how to answer the question, plus I'm a Libra. I take it you've been 'worked on' and are now in the hurting, hoping and praying phase. I'm praying for perfection in your body from head to toe, meanwhile, keep on venting with your pen and humor, too, if you can reach it. CayCay
Rodrigues Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 4:55 AM
That means so much, CayCay! I need that prayer. Going on vacation soon…seems one thing after another - had epidural, then eye infection, now this leg cramp the other night caused a strain on my calf. Have my leg up and iced…h e l p…I know God is near…bless you. I know…the number system is left for us to figure out. Bless you, my friend!
Alhemaidy Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 11:37 AM
Best prayers and wishes!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 2:01 PM
Thank you, Abdullah!
Rodgers Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 8:49 AM
Dear Kim, Such raw honesty of living inside pain’s shifting scale. I felt your pain between endurance and faith, the way suffering bends but doesn’t erase meaning. Even pain becomes a testimony when it’s spoken with such unflinching clarity. Autumn Blessings, Dear Kim, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 10:04 AM
Hoping for relief! Hugs and thank you!
Jones Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 8:02 AM
So sorry you are dealing with pain. Hoping you find some relief soon! Hugs sweet Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 10:04 AM
Thank you, Karen! Hugs, sweet friend!
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