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Choose A Line Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Joseph May. Date written: 05/21/2025

Line 2: "she reassured me with an unfamiliar line" she's but an alluring, poisonous spider that wields her sexiness like a weapon. come what may, she gets what she wants; an opportunist; her target, malleable men uninterested in relationships, she's all about grifting. she once tried to lure me into her web. she reassured me with an unfamiliar line... "don't worry, I don't bite!"...but I knew better. she's an effortlessly seductive temptress with intoxicating charms tough to resist; she enjoys dangling her feminine wiles like a carrot for benighted men to nibble. she's left a trail of broken men in her wake. be careful, my guy! do not let her suck you into the vortex of her magnetism, for she'll be the author of your destruction.

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Date: 5/23/2025 9:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your powerful write. A wonderful ending. Have a blessed day with your win.......
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/23/2025 1:02:00 PM
Thank you very much, Paula:-)
Date: 5/22/2025 3:17:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Nicely done
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/22/2025 3:37:00 PM
Thank you very much for the congratulations and my placement, Joseph:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 5/21/2025 8:33:00 AM
Gosh what a unique take on this prompt line ! I wouldnt have thought of coming up with something like this! Youv written a brilliant take dear EI, one that stands out and with clever wordplay and in such a seamless manner! That last line is powerful! Perfect for a prompt " author of destruction" love that!!!! FAVE Pls do check your soupmail too. Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/21/2025 11:52:00 AM
Inky, thank you very much indeed for the wonderful feedback, visit, soupmail, and the fave, my friend. Most obliged.

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