Edward Ibeh Poet Free verse

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Choose A Line Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Joseph May. Date written: 05/21/2025

Temptress

Line 2: "she reassured me with an unfamiliar line"


     she's but an alluring, poisonous spider 
     that wields her sexiness like a weapon.
   come what may, she gets what she wants;
    an opportunist; her target, malleable men 

  uninterested in relationships, she's all about 
 grifting. she once tried to lure me into her web.
     she reassured me with an unfamiliar line...
  "don't worry, I don't bite!"...but I knew better.

     she's an effortlessly seductive temptress
      with intoxicating charms tough to resist;
       she enjoys dangling her feminine wiles 
      like a carrot for benighted men to nibble.

    she's left a trail of broken men in her wake.
    be careful,  my guy! do not let her suck you 
  into the vortex of her magnetism, for she'll be
              the author of your destruction.

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Valsa George June 30, 2025 at 2:13 AM There are such wicked temptresses- They hide the fang behind their smiles. They target men and like wicked witches suck out the life sap from them. The warning not to fall into their trap is timely and relevant. Well composed, dear Edward. Congratulations on your win. Sorry to know that your were suffering from Covid. Wish you a speedy recovery.

Paula Goldsmith May 23, 2025 at 9:37 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your powerful write. A wonderful ending. Have a blessed day with your win....... Edward Ibeh May 23, 2025 at 1:02 PM Thank you very much, Paula:-)

Joseph May May 22, 2025 at 3:17 PM Congrats on your win, Nicely done Edward Ibeh May 22, 2025 at 3:37 PM Thank you very much for the congratulations and my placement, Joseph:-) Most appreciated.

Ink Empress May 21, 2025 at 8:33 AM Gosh what a unique take on this prompt line ! I wouldnt have thought of coming up with something like this! Youv written a brilliant take dear EI, one that stands out and with clever wordplay and in such a seamless manner! That last line is powerful! Perfect for a prompt " author of destruction" love that!!!! FAVE Pls do check your soupmail too. Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always Edward Ibeh May 21, 2025 at 11:52 AM Inky, thank you very much indeed for the wonderful feedback, visit, soupmail, and the fave, my friend. Most obliged.