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Tempting Love

Tempting Love By Dane Smith-Johnsen Hand in hand, we walked beside the winding trail. We laughed and loved along this path by and by. And felt extraordinary; two hearts entwined. The faintest scent of lavender embraced us. Distantly, gardenias decorated, white. A quiet interlude impassioned delight. And our thoughts within the wind lightly soared. As in times before, we knew love’s quiet peace. The day thus started vanquished every sadness. Here, on this very lane, so often traversed, Our wildest dreams of joyfulness found birth. And you, as every part of me, prayed to kiss. There, beside the wall, beneath the eyes of God. Restraint unveiled; sweet promises hence covered. Destined to impasse passion until betrothed, Love’s temperance, the foundation of honor, Defied assorted pangs of fleshly yearnings. To taste your lips and electrify your soul, With such emotion that only true love knows- Feel deep tenderness against your thirsty heart. From temptation thus entangled we must part. Before shame singes two souls with grave sorrow. We must pledge our love to keep tomorrow. And vow to enter marriage pure, undefiled. Let us live to save this passion once again. And fill our souls, memories until then.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/3/2009 8:56:00 PM
Absolutely Beautiful... I Love The Romantic language... It makes me think of Ladies in Waiting and Hero-Knights (which I Love of Course) Really Enjoyed, the Passion and Purity of the Poem MoonBee
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Date: 8/27/2009 1:29:00 PM
Love the sentiments expressed. Thoughts left open to the world and the effects of love brilliantly described. Thanks for your comments...grrth
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Date: 8/24/2009 12:57:00 PM
Dane, you have soup mail! Looking forward to seeing you! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/21/2009 11:06:00 PM
a passionate temptation of words that reflct the love you both share along with your spiritual needs to be pure and await the destiny and sanctity of marriage, I respect and i feel honored for you bothall the best in the future of your love,,Blessings..Cecil,,and Thank you so very much for reading my words as often as you do and leaving a piece of your heart and mind as well.
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Date: 8/20/2009 5:24:00 AM
I like this poem, Dane. It is so well written. But I'm sorry not to be Gert from L.O. Florida. Thank you for your comment Autumn Leaves. Gert
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Date: 8/19/2009 12:34:00 PM
Beautiful poem Dane Ann, a real pleasure to read, thank you for sharing>>James
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Date: 8/19/2009 9:15:00 AM
Hi Hun Every line had me captivated from beginning to end. A truly breathtaking write! Hey too, I want to thank you for the link to your beautiful picture sunrise. So sweet of you! I truly enjoyed!! Bless your heart. Take care hun and keep taking pictures you are very talented indeed. Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 8/19/2009 5:03:00 AM
I missed reading so many extremely outstanding poems yesterday. I hope to get them read today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us Dane Ann. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/18/2009 7:05:00 PM
Very nice poem, Dane! Been trying to call your cell phone. Need to talk to you if you are up tonight. Could you email your home number to me at seafaress8@aol.com ?? Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/18/2009 3:00:00 PM
Nicely written. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/18/2009 2:59:00 PM
pledge to keep tomarrow? is some one going away? enter marriage? undefiled? is the taliban in control now? jhl
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