Temptation Salvation

A. W. Nutter

Constant battles raging within
Masters fighting for my soul
Seeking forgiveness, chasing sin
A life spinning out of control

Creatures adorned with freewill
Christ or Satan, my only choice
Hearkening to the tempters trill
As I pray to hear my God’s voice

Forced to pay homage to a reprobate
The holy trinity refuses an audience
Satan, filling a young soul with hate
The heart grows cold with defiance

Pathways taken, lead to destruction
Time spent on earth, has been my hell
An unworthy soul seeking salvation
Purifying blood, to break Satan's spell
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Johnson Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 4:20 AM
Comment thanks mate White of light do use it well, Darkness can seduce you too, Therein lie the fires of hell, Dodge it sidestep it wants you Don Johnson
Palmer Avatar
March 12, 2011 at 1:57 PM
You are a gifted poet Anthony, perhaps even a modern day prophet. It takes a lot to write from the heart as you do, words that contain the power to change lives.
Onclaud Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 3:00 AM
the inner wolves do grate us, anthony.. and yet we transcend this by keeping the flames of faith alive... what a divine write from your flowing pen.. i am stunned! thnaks for your kind words..:) huggs, nette
Guzzi Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 5:19 PM
The things which men torture themselves with aye? No need for Satan we have our own torments and tormentors. Light & Love [and we can be our own saviors too ;)]
Situation Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 6:48 AM
very good. and i have to thank you for your honesty on my poem. it was kind of personal and writen to someone in perticular. you were right about that too. T. S.
Freeman Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 6:09 PM
Hi Anthony, haven't read you in a while. Nice Rhyme on temptation and salvation, Agape, Moses
George   Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 3:37 AM
Life, I find is like a scale of justice. In order to experience the good, there must be the bad also. Very profound writing, Anthony. Lainie
Pettit Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 2:18 PM
Very well written with great descriptiveness and rhyming.
Beesley Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 12:48 PM
love it...keep the fury and the fire flowing
Maverick Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 10:38 AM
very forthright piece you have penned here Anthony, such honesty will not go without its reward.
Kendrick Avatar
January 31, 2011 at 3:00 PM
I read this one and commented twice already but my comments disappeared.Enjoyed reading your work..We all sin and are tempted by satan even after we have made that committment to serve Christ..Thank God that Jesus made the way for us...Sara
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January 31, 2011 at 10:33 AM
Interesting topic that you have chose..All we have to do is accept the forgiveness that has already been handled for us by Christ's death and resurrection..Satan still uses his wiles to temp us even after we have accepted the sacrifice..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Sara
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January 31, 2011 at 10:30 AM
Forgiven is the knowledge that one has to accept..Such a simple message but hard to understand..Even then satan continues to use his wiles to temp man..Good topic and excellent way to express the idea...Glad that I stopped by to read your work..Sara
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January 30, 2011 at 2:37 PM
Many of us feel this internal struggle that you describe so well in your poem, Anthony. If you recognize your sins and feel true contrition, I believe a loving God will welcome you home. Love, Carolyn
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