Richard Lamoureux Poet Quatrain

Temptation

I'm bombarded by temptation 
So many delectable treats
Yet all the things that I desire
Are not just things that I can eat

As I watch my Television
I see the lives I'd like to lead
My life seems so ordinary
Temptation, says that's what I need

To live in exotic places
Wield power like a magic stick
Lost in erotic images
Dissatisfaction is her trick

Temptation, she's so alluring
As these thoughts they assault my mind
With great skill she wields her power
Yet it's my heart that makes me blind

In the end she's not my master
With God's strength I can look away
Those things that looked delectable
Seem less alluring when I pray

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Monterey Sirak November 23, 2013 at 9:14 AM How true. Prayer tops temptation every time. Richard Lamoureux November 23, 2013 at 9:45 AM ;0)

Just That Archaic Poet November 23, 2013 at 8:55 AM I really related to this piece, Richard. God knows I've wrestled with vices, addictions and temptations for many, many years, so this one hit home for me. Well-expressed poem, my friend :) Richard Lamoureux November 23, 2013 at 8:59 AM Thanks again Chan.

Andrea Dietrich November 22, 2013 at 10:25 PM A good topic to write about. I admire a man who can resist temptation. by the way, typo on the temptation word, line 8 Richard Lamoureux November 22, 2013 at 10:38 PM I'm tempted to leave it to see if anyone else will notice. *lol* but I will resist!

Cecilia Macfarlane November 22, 2013 at 8:06 PM Resisting temptation is a challenge most of us face, but it separates the strong from the weak. You Rick are full of strength....great write! Hugs Richard Lamoureux November 22, 2013 at 8:08 PM Thanks Cecilia

Shadow Hamilton November 22, 2013 at 6:01 PM the allure of temptation is always strong Rick a great portrayal super poem Shadow x smile hug Richard Lamoureux November 22, 2013 at 6:04 PM Hugs back. Thanks!

Sandra Adams November 21, 2013 at 8:52 PM temptation is the route of all evil...walking away is great strength! Good write Richard...enjoyed reading this one :) Richard Lamoureux November 22, 2013 at 9:22 AM Thanks Sandra.

Donna Jones November 21, 2013 at 2:22 PM An amazing poem and message Richard...thank you Richard Lamoureux November 22, 2013 at 9:23 AM Thanks Donna.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire November 21, 2013 at 1:23 PM Dear Richard, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. I read in Awe this MasterPiece Prayer is so Powerful This goes into my Favorite file. I Thank-YOU for putting me in YOUR Favorite POET list. YOU have been on my fav POET list for quite a while. Soup Mail Call LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry Richard Lamoureux November 22, 2013 at 9:24 AM Thanks Harry.

Eileen Manassian November 21, 2013 at 9:04 AM Richard....This is so amazing, and true. Have you read the book, Every Man's Battle? Look it up on the net. Very powerful book, I'm told. I heard about it......Lovely poem....Lovely conviction you cherish in your heart. And yes...the answer to your question is YES..REALLY!!! Richard Lamoureux November 21, 2013 at 9:14 AM Thanks for alerting me to the corrections. I appreciate you helping me out. I'm off to see what you have come up with today.

Ndaba Sibanda November 21, 2013 at 8:58 AM Richard , your poem emphasizes the winning power of prayer. Great read. Richard Lamoureux November 21, 2013 at 9:03 AM Thanks Ndaba.