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Temptation

In the darkness of midnight and terror, When I toss and turn in my bed; With tears and a memory of error, On a pathway of sin I have fled. In my mind there are visions I'd banish, The truths of the deeds I have done; For I beg and ask that they vanish, And they vanish, all except one. That one with a sigh like the splendor, Of the moon in the midnight skies; That one with a magic so tender, That one with a trance in his eyes. He comes close in his loving beauty, With languid, indolent grace; And my heart won't do its duty, When I look at the light in his face. He caresses my face and I quiver, And tremble with exquisite pains; He sighs like the wind on the river, And blood rushes fast through my veins. He half smiles in amorous fashion, And kisses with soft tender touch; He holds me with power and passion, In his arms I love him so much. Oh phantom of sad unrelenting, Fly back to the darkness and sod; Always too dear for repenting, Yet standing between me and my God. If in a dream I should meet him, And kiss those lips I love well; So dear in my arms I would greet him, And melt in the fires of hell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/20/2011 4:29:00 PM
I just love this one, my friend
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Date: 9/8/2011 8:42:00 AM
Kind of like the sword and the sorcerer here Elizabeth, Nicely written...God Bless...Taz
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Date: 9/7/2011 8:59:00 PM
Elisabeth, thank you for you adolation for my poem 'My Secret Sin'. I never offer platitudes to undeserving works nor do I solicit them due to my commitment to honesty, therefore you should take this to heart when I say that this poem IS exceptional, you should be proud of this poem. I chose not to name my secret sin but instead chose to leave it open in order that the reader might better relate, but you dear did with elegance. Should you choose to read my poems again, then read 'The Unboud'.
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Date: 9/5/2011 8:36:00 AM
Who hasn't felt this way in a dream or reality at one time or another? The longing for love from others is the longing for the love from whence we came and wither we hope to return. If love is the unfulfilled desire for completeness, how or why do we view this as sinful? Ahh..we humans are beautifully perplexing. Thanks for helping us ponder the greatest of life's mysteries as well as commenting on my poem, "A Prayer." You are a shining star, Elizabeth. Keep writing & shine on:)
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Date: 9/4/2011 3:35:00 PM
Your third stanza was as smooooth as butta! And your eloquence of phrase was perfect. I'd would like to read anotha. Won't you speak to me direct?
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Date: 9/4/2011 12:31:00 PM
This is called true temptation, words are glittering like Diamonds. Thanks, bl
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Date: 9/4/2011 8:55:00 AM
extremely powerful and descriptive showing the battle that rages in our humanity. Well written to be sure Elizabeth! Your talent shines forth. Keep on wrting and praying
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Date: 9/4/2011 3:24:00 AM
excellent write!!
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Date: 9/3/2011 7:07:00 PM
Chillbumps...oh the chillbumps! I'm with Gwendolen, a very spectacular write. Is it wrong to say that you captured temptations beauty with this magnificent entry? I don't like repeating myself when commenting but you have a beautiful talent for rhyme and your verse, rhyme and meter here is truly superb! Love the way you blend sensuous subject matter and the questioning of will! Totally a dynamic write Elizabeth! I love you and your work and your last comments made me blush while reading at work!
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Date: 9/3/2011 12:54:00 PM
This is s-p-e-c-t-a-c-u-l-a-r! Been trapped before..not doing it again. The last stanza is your flee from thee part, right? You are so gifted in this write! Just say no to this guy...eternity is a looooooong time. Hugs, Gwendolen
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Date: 9/3/2011 11:10:00 AM
wonderful write Elizabeth....smiles....chiquita
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Date: 9/3/2011 6:35:00 AM
Anything for love. Great write
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Date: 9/3/2011 1:54:00 AM
I maintain yet again; and add, you are the guru of rhyme. It is always a pleasure, and a treat to read your poetry.
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Date: 9/2/2011 2:37:00 PM
Oh wow, what a very intriguing write-- tempting indeed, that sure must be one hell of a love (ok sorry pun intended)-- quite a different write from you that I read today-- I mean the topic-- sometimes yeah love can be dark... very gripping write! Enjoyed this Elizabeth and thank you so much for always dropping by my poems :D Always a pleasure to see your inspiring comments :)
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Date: 9/2/2011 2:24:00 PM
WOW, lovely Lady Elizabeth exquisite poem filled with passion emotion love darkness and light, brilliant write.....with love....old Jack...and we can chat anytime you like would be a wonderful experience.
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Date: 9/2/2011 1:46:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Elizabeth. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/2/2011 12:51:00 PM
What a wondersul piece Elizabeth, I can feel the passion in your words. It touched my soul. Carol x
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Date: 9/2/2011 9:09:00 AM
Well Tony is so right.....enjoyed again today.
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Date: 9/2/2011 6:51:00 AM
That is how you write a poem and tell a story. I'll be able to tell people that I used to read her stuff before she was famous. Tony
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Date: 9/2/2011 5:35:00 AM
This just trips off the tongue. absolutely brilliant. great work. Elizabeth. best regards Marg
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Date: 9/2/2011 4:23:00 AM
i am so taken by this experiential piece, elize.. so personal and up close, the whole pure scene lingers in my soul.. manificent! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 9/2/2011 3:35:00 AM
I see you are getting GREAT comments on this one and deservedly so, Elizabeth. It reads very profound. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/2/2011 2:08:00 AM
If I could give but a kiss To those sweet lips we all love so well Time would seem sure never ending As I would melt with you in those Same fires of hell. :*)
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Date: 9/2/2011 1:10:00 AM
E.W., a deep poem.. light and darkness... . Thank you for sharing your poem, have yourself a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 9/1/2011 11:13:00 PM
WOW!! That is a masterpiece, Elizabeth...I absolutely loved it!!
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