Temptation

In the darkness of midnight and terror,
When I toss and turn in my bed;
With tears and a memory of error,
On a pathway of sin I have fled.
In my mind there are visions I'd banish,
The truths of the deeds I have done;
For I beg and ask that they vanish,
And they vanish, all except one.

That one with a sigh like the splendor,
Of the moon in the midnight skies;
That one with a magic so tender,
That one with a trance in his eyes.
He comes close in his loving beauty,
With languid, indolent grace;
And my heart won't do its duty,
When I look at the light in his face.

He caresses my face and I quiver,
And tremble with exquisite pains;
He sighs like the wind on the river,
And blood rushes fast through my veins.
He half smiles in amorous fashion,
And kisses with soft tender touch;
He holds me with power and passion,
In his arms I love him so much.

Oh phantom of sad unrelenting,
Fly back to the darkness and sod;
Always too dear for repenting,
Yet standing between me and my God.
If in a dream I should meet him,
And kiss those lips I love well;
So dear in my arms I would greet him,
And melt in the fires of hell.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Horne Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 4:29 PM
I just love this one, my friend
Pickett Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 8:42 AM
Kind of like the sword and the sorcerer here Elizabeth, Nicely written...God Bless...Taz
Brumley Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 8:59 PM
Elisabeth, thank you for you adolation for my poem 'My Secret Sin'. I never offer platitudes to undeserving works nor do I solicit them due to my commitment to honesty, therefore you should take this to heart when I say that this poem IS exceptional, you should be proud of this poem. I chose not to name my secret sin but instead chose to leave it open in order that the reader might better relate, but you dear did with elegance. Should you choose to read my poems again, then read 'The Unboud'.
Martin Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 8:36 AM
Who hasn't felt this way in a dream or reality at one time or another? The longing for love from others is the longing for the love from whence we came and wither we hope to return. If love is the unfulfilled desire for completeness, how or why do we view this as sinful? Ahh..we humans are beautifully perplexing. Thanks for helping us ponder the greatest of life's mysteries as well as commenting on my poem, "A Prayer." You are a shining star, Elizabeth. Keep writing & shine on:)
Johnson Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 3:35 PM
Your third stanza was as smooooth as butta! And your eloquence of phrase was perfect. I'd would like to read anotha. Won't you speak to me direct?
Devnath  Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 12:31 PM
This is called true temptation, words are glittering like Diamonds. Thanks, bl
Dufresne Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 8:55 AM
extremely powerful and descriptive showing the battle that rages in our humanity. Well written to be sure Elizabeth! Your talent shines forth. Keep on wrting and praying
Palli Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 3:24 AM
excellent write!!
Sumler Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 7:07 PM
Chillbumps...oh the chillbumps! I'm with Gwendolen, a very spectacular write. Is it wrong to say that you captured temptations beauty with this magnificent entry? I don't like repeating myself when commenting but you have a beautiful talent for rhyme and your verse, rhyme and meter here is truly superb! Love the way you blend sensuous subject matter and the questioning of will! Totally a dynamic write Elizabeth! I love you and your work and your last comments made me blush while reading at work!
Song Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 12:54 PM
This is s-p-e-c-t-a-c-u-l-a-r! Been trapped before..not doing it again. The last stanza is your flee from thee part, right? You are so gifted in this write! Just say no to this guy...eternity is a looooooong time. Hugs, Gwendolen
Baity Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 11:10 AM
wonderful write Elizabeth....smiles....chiquita
Clark Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 6:35 AM
Anything for love. Great write
Effendi Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 1:54 AM
I maintain yet again; and add, you are the guru of rhyme. It is always a pleasure, and a treat to read your poetry.
K. Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 2:37 PM
Oh wow, what a very intriguing write-- tempting indeed, that sure must be one hell of a love (ok sorry pun intended)-- quite a different write from you that I read today-- I mean the topic-- sometimes yeah love can be dark... very gripping write! Enjoyed this Elizabeth and thank you so much for always dropping by my poems :D Always a pleasure to see your inspiring comments :)
Ross Jr. Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 2:24 PM
WOW, lovely Lady Elizabeth exquisite poem filled with passion emotion love darkness and light, brilliant write.....with love....old Jack...and we can chat anytime you like would be a wonderful experience.
Brown Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 1:46 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Elizabeth. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
Henderson Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 12:51 PM
What a wondersul piece Elizabeth, I can feel the passion in your words. It touched my soul. Carol x
Culverhouse Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 9:09 AM
Well Tony is so right.....enjoyed again today.
Lane Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 6:51 AM
That is how you write a poem and tell a story. I'll be able to tell people that I used to read her stuff before she was famous. Tony
Foster Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 5:35 AM
This just trips off the tongue. absolutely brilliant. great work. Elizabeth. best regards Marg
Onclaud Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 4:23 AM
i am so taken by this experiential piece, elize.. so personal and up close, the whole pure scene lingers in my soul.. manificent! :) huggs, nette
Dietrich Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 3:35 AM
I see you are getting GREAT comments on this one and deservedly so, Elizabeth. It reads very profound. LUv, Andrea
Kearley Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 2:08 AM
If I could give but a kiss To those sweet lips we all love so well Time would seem sure never ending As I would melt with you in those Same fires of hell. :*)
A   Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 1:10 AM
E.W., a deep poem.. light and darkness... . Thank you for sharing your poem, have yourself a nice one,..p.d.
Sivey Avatar
September 1, 2011 at 11:13 PM
WOW!! That is a masterpiece, Elizabeth...I absolutely loved it!!
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