Nette Onclaud Poet Free verse

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Tempo of Raindance

beneath the stars, arms gaily twirl

in rainfall… a mellow dance, please

with fireflies dressed in silken  gauze

this evening pours a  rhapsody…

barefoot,  we drench in tempo of gust

as the sky becomes our canopy

kissing , melting through shapeless forms.




SHWEET Free Verse Contest of Andrea Dietrich
7/26/2015

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Debbie Duncan September 2, 2015 at 11:28 AM Love it :)

Robert Lindley August 1, 2015 at 10:25 PM A visual delight my friend. Congrats on a fine win! A7

Laura Leiser July 30, 2015 at 2:20 PM I love this romantic, rainfall story, Nette! Congrats on your win, 7. :)

Carrie Richards July 30, 2015 at 10:13 AM Oh the romance !!! Just perfect and shweet as a soft summer rain !!! Congrats to you Nette!!

Casarah Nance July 30, 2015 at 7:07 AM Oh I would love to see you dance in the rain like this, your images are so real I can feel them! :) Very beautiful Nette ;)

Skat A July 30, 2015 at 3:33 AM Nette, Congratulations on your SHWEET Free Verse Win. **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A July 30, 2015 at 2:40 AM Nette, congratulations on your win.... LINDA

Jan Allison July 30, 2015 at 1:58 AM Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Lee Carter July 30, 2015 at 12:20 AM Love your rain dance congrats on your win! ~lee

Lycia Harding July 29, 2015 at 11:54 PM Now that is SHWEET! Congrats on your win, dear Nette. xoxo

Andrea Dietrich July 29, 2015 at 11:40 PM a beautiful dance of rain, Nette!! Love the romantic aspect and the sky as a canopy. Congrats for a well deserved top win.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 29, 2015 at 11:39 PM Wonderful romantic masterpiece nette! Congrats on ur win! A perfect 7 for this passion marvel!

Daver Austin July 27, 2015 at 2:57 PM Nette, this little gem is better without the picture. The wetness comes through. Love, daver

Daver Austin July 27, 2015 at 2:51 PM Yes, nice soft rhythmic flow and wet. Love, daver

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 27, 2015 at 8:35 AM Nette, I want to be in there too dancing under the rain!!! weeeeeeeeee, why the date?? :D I just miss your company!!!~Olive ELoisa =') hugsss! thanks for my placement.. :D!

Kash Poet July 27, 2015 at 5:19 AM Beautifull freeverse!

Ravi Sathasivam July 27, 2015 at 1:58 AM Excellent. Exquisite write. Enjoyed reading it. TFS

Ken Carroll July 26, 2015 at 7:12 PM Well crafted rhythmic write Nette.. Good luck!

Harry Horsman July 26, 2015 at 2:51 PM One can feel the tempo, so visual is this wonderful poem.

Paul Callus July 26, 2015 at 6:23 AM Drenched in the beauty of this free verse I am, Nette! Lowering of standards is never an alternative for you! Well expressed romantic tempo! hugs // paul

Ashley Conte July 26, 2015 at 2:33 AM Gee,the beauty of being able to be caught up in a moment of free thought. You captured that sense of spontaneity with this alluring verse. " Melting through shapeless forms", got me!

Jan Allison July 25, 2015 at 4:46 PM Your words dance across the page Nette - stunning imagery as ever - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7

Franco Gonza July 25, 2015 at 4:28 PM Makes me want to relive my youth as this fluent, radiant poem thrills through every line of drip-drop delight!

Amelie Mara July 25, 2015 at 2:34 PM There is such movement in this exquisite poem. And so magical, delicate, breathtaking I feel like dancing in the rain!

Gary Bateman July 25, 2015 at 2:24 PM Hello Nette, Best of Luck in the contest!! This is a truly radiant write with each of the verses melting into place. Excellent!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary

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