Nette Onclaud Poet Choka

Temples of Angkor Wat

sari of morn floats

draping temples with orchids,

as Angkor Wat blows its mist

to flame coned incense;

and in the still of homage

pilgrims wander with their gods.


Angkor Wat, Cambodia

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May 2018 Standard Contest of Brian Strand

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Sonia Walker November 1, 2016 at 11:25 AM Nette, congratulations on your well-earned First Placement of 'Temples of Angkor Wat.' Beautiful descriptions, all music to my ears. ~ Sonia

Moon Flower November 1, 2016 at 9:17 AM A well-deserved write for this stunning trophy, nette. Congrats again! hugs

Joseph May November 1, 2016 at 7:53 AM Congrats on a great win Nette

Afzal Nusker October 30, 2016 at 11:10 PM Congratulations for topping the chart with you wonderful poem, Nette.

Madeleine Mclaughlin October 30, 2016 at 11:01 PM Great write, congrats on win. I can see the area, it's described well.

Agnes Krampe October 30, 2016 at 9:13 PM Beautiful and evocative. Congrats on your win, Nette. Agnes

Kim Rodrigues October 30, 2016 at 8:55 PM Congratulations! Nice write!

Brenda Meier-Hans September 30, 2014 at 12:18 PM Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem. I love the last two lines.

Ma Yaseen September 28, 2014 at 4:22 AM many many Congrats, nette... Hugs malik

Kayod5 Kayode September 28, 2014 at 12:53 AM Congrats Nette.

Andrea Dietrich September 27, 2014 at 9:23 PM Loved this one from the start. Congrats on your very well deserved win!!

Debbie Guzzi September 27, 2014 at 3:57 PM so cool nette I have not been there, friends of mine went they said it was SO HOT! Congrad's Light & Love

Joyce Johnson September 27, 2014 at 10:09 AM Exotic write and win, Nette. Congratulations.

Abdul Malik Mandani September 27, 2014 at 9:14 AM "...pilgrims wander with their gods." I like this line. Very telling. Congrats.

Richard Lamoureux September 27, 2014 at 8:28 AM One of my favorites so far, congrats!

Maurice Yvonne September 27, 2014 at 7:22 AM !!!!CONGRATULATIONS!!!!

Maurice Yvonne September 27, 2014 at 7:20 AM nette I am such a huge fan of your work, I have to fav this choka.

Faye Gibson September 27, 2014 at 6:06 AM Beautiful images, Nette. Congrats.

Paul Callus September 27, 2014 at 5:20 AM Congratulations, Nette!! I love the feeling of peace...serenity...and the image you painted; it's a basis for inspiration. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 27, 2014 at 5:04 AM Lovely n unique take Nette! Fabulous write n win! Huge congrats!

Jan Allison September 27, 2014 at 2:29 AM dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta September 27, 2014 at 1:55 AM Thanks for the entry and support. Congrats on the win, nette

Dr.Ram Mehta September 24, 2014 at 6:30 AM Soup Mail!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2014 at 12:31 AM this is very nice, Nette. One of the better choka poems I have seen in this contest!

Maurice Yvonne September 20, 2014 at 5:53 AM Exquisite, any one who loves fine poetry is forced to read your writes over and over again.

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