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People look at me and see a fortress. Someone without weakness. A carefree soul without boundaries. A welcoming warm heart. A shell full of life. I find an aura is what we seek and a tender touch is what we crave. Sickened by the way we bind ourselves to materialistic things. Can we not just seek friendship, love and understanding. The wrong say I am weak because I look good for in all. I've come from little in my life. I've been beaten down and scarred. My innocence was taken very young, but I will not let that alter the way I see things! I refuse to believe we were put here to dwell on the past. So much is given to be thankful for. Why live for the bad? I have strength but I am no fortress. My walls do come down. My heart has been cold but then I was saved. I knew I wasn't alone. I seek to share all this life I hold inside. When I look at people I see promise. I see love. Hearts bonding. Friendships being made. Now I ask you why not live for the moment. Live for each other. Let it go, its not as if you're going to get out alive.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/4/2014 3:26:00 PM
There is a profound truth found in youth. I especially love the last two lines in this very good, very well-thought poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup, Laura !
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Date: 8/29/2014 11:46:00 PM
Hi, what an awesome piece you wrote. I love it. Well done
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Date: 8/27/2014 7:20:00 PM
Laura, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 8/15/2014 12:19:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Laura - I choose your first very well written poem :) - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- P-Soup Rule: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/14/2014 6:56:00 PM
Laura,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/14/2014 6:28:00 AM
Nice thought well penned, laura
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Date: 8/14/2014 6:18:00 AM
Part of your writing is covered but from what i can see it looks nice. Come check my poems out btw
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