Template To Save the Soul a Collaboration With Ivory Jones

Caught off guard in templates of color
 that feeling I have frozen in the flesh 
 is singed by the siege of beauty served

Burnt oranges,reds,and colors of ash
Lusciousness and fleshy desires
Is it just a depiction my eyes have envisioned

Created and demonstrated to cut the frame 
edging the sight to save the soul that saw 
poison in the passion of painted pictures

Our juices produced the perfect antidote 
Which laid the blueprint for the impeccable frame
Together our bodies permeated the template 

A border to beset the beast buried 
under the blunder of censored skills
with the site to see free in cyanide

Boarders now imperturbable 
Representation remains unblembished
Unwanted deciphering becomes unresponsive
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Chiri Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 4:33 AM
lol James did i tell you i met Ivory? I met her a long time ago! I will have to tell you about it! You will be surprised but wait maybe i shouldnt tell you since she is no longer on here! But she was suppose to talk to you,,,,i am assuming she never did! Wow scandalous! Yea ok but this was a very good poem!;)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 6:07 AM
This is hip, avant-garde love poetry, James and Ivory. A passionate mix of existentialism and surrealism. Two talented sous w/mad prop poetic skillz. Love and peace always.
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 12:50 AM
What a scorcher! Love this poem....particuarly this, "A border to beset the beast buried under the blunder of censored skills with the site to see free in cyanide". Sizzling collaboration, totally in sync.
Swartz Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 8:37 AM
Thank you Leanne. It was a fun poem to write with Ivory.
Andresen Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 8:12 AM
- What a wonderful co-write, James & Ivory - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Swartz Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 8:39 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise it was fun to do.
Tripp Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 11:22 AM
James, you have found the perfect writing partner. Your styles are awesome together! Great write.
Swartz Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 11:09 PM
Thank you Rhoda!
One Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 9:32 AM
Great collaboration James, nice to see you collaborating with a new poet..
Swartz Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 11:08 PM
Thanks SO. She was great to write with.
Pandit Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 6:58 AM
Looks like you found the perfect antidote...your poem is adorned with choice words ..as always you create a unique discourse. Well done, James and Ivory.
Swartz Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 11:07 PM
Thank you Vijay.
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