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Template To Save the Soul a Collaboration With Ivory Jones

Caught off guard in templates of color that feeling I have frozen in the flesh is singed by the siege of beauty served Burnt oranges,reds,and colors of ash Lusciousness and fleshy desires Is it just a depiction my eyes have envisioned Created and demonstrated to cut the frame edging the sight to save the soul that saw poison in the passion of painted pictures Our juices produced the perfect antidote Which laid the blueprint for the impeccable frame Together our bodies permeated the template A border to beset the beast buried under the blunder of censored skills with the site to see free in cyanide Boarders now imperturbable Representation remains unblembished Unwanted deciphering becomes unresponsive

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/30/2019 4:33:00 AM
lol James did i tell you i met Ivory? I met her a long time ago! I will have to tell you about it! You will be surprised but wait maybe i shouldnt tell you since she is no longer on here! But she was suppose to talk to you,,,,i am assuming she never did! Wow scandalous! Yea ok but this was a very good poem!;)
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Date: 1/23/2018 6:07:00 AM
This is hip, avant-garde love poetry, James and Ivory. A passionate mix of existentialism and surrealism. Two talented sous w/mad prop poetic skillz. Love and peace always.
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Date: 1/22/2018 12:50:00 AM
What a scorcher! Love this poem....particuarly this, "A border to beset the beast buried under the blunder of censored skills with the site to see free in cyanide". Sizzling collaboration, totally in sync.
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James Swartz
Date: 1/22/2018 8:37:00 AM
Thank you Leanne. It was a fun poem to write with Ivory.
Date: 1/21/2018 8:12:00 AM
- What a wonderful co-write, James & Ivory - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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James Swartz
Date: 1/21/2018 8:39:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise it was fun to do.
Date: 1/20/2018 11:22:00 AM
James, you have found the perfect writing partner. Your styles are awesome together! Great write.
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James Swartz
Date: 1/20/2018 11:09:00 PM
Thank you Rhoda!
Date: 1/20/2018 9:32:00 AM
Great collaboration James, nice to see you collaborating with a new poet..
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James Swartz
Date: 1/20/2018 11:08:00 PM
Thanks SO. She was great to write with.
Date: 1/20/2018 6:58:00 AM
Looks like you found the perfect antidote...your poem is adorned with choice words ..as always you create a unique discourse. Well done, James and Ivory.
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James Swartz
Date: 1/20/2018 11:07:00 PM
Thank you Vijay.

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