Tempest of the Mind

Deep in my shrewd mind, a storm rages on Dark clouds gather as the wind howls till dawn A tempest of thoughts, I cannot control A battle within, now taking its toll My heart is a ship, tossed out to the sea The waves of emotion crash over me Sails are tattered and the mast is broken As I'm left adrift with words unspoken The lightning strikes, a sharp pain in my chest A constant sign of all that I've repressed The thunder roars, like a scream in my head Telling me things that fill me with such dread The storm grows stronger with each passing day I try to find peace, but my world is gray For the darkness within cannot be tamed Leaving me broken, self-abused, and shamed My mind’s a war zone, my thoughts the soldiers Fighting a battle with no real closure I am a prisoner, trapped in a cell With no escape from this personal hell But amid the chaos, a gleam of light A beacon of hope to this endless night For I’m not just a ship lost out to sea I’m a warrior fighting to be free I'll weather this storm escaping the dark Knowing inside, there's a fire to spark The clouds will part and the sun will shine through My mind will be clear to seek a new view
*I wrote this poem on January 28, 2024, as part of a ’30 days of poetry’ January challenge. This was day 28 and the prompt was: Write a poem about mental illness. This is a very personal issue of mine that I struggle with every day.

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Date: 3/2/2024 3:02:00 AM
Beautiful writing and I understand so well. Excellent entry, too. God bless you, love, Gina
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