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Tempest

                                         cataclysmic waves

                                     awaken sailors' nightmares

                                      last rites claimed by sea







Written on 2/10/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/21/2016 2:46:00 PM
Laura, an excellent Haiku. As a Haiku Lover i see this one as a seven and it does go into my faves. Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/21/2016 2:55:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Vladislav! I'm really glad you enjoyed my haiku :)
Date: 3/20/2016 9:56:00 AM
Laura, a lovely haiku, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/20/2016 2:37:00 PM
Thank you, Laura Loo!
Date: 2/12/2016 4:24:00 PM
Your tempestuous ocean is the burial place for many, Laura; powerful end line! gl in the contest. ~ Regards:) paul
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/21/2016 10:45:00 PM
Thank you, sweet Eileen, for your encouraging comments! I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: 2/12/2016 3:06:00 PM
Striking imagery, dear....Sad last line. Good luck in the contest.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/12/2016 3:11:00 PM
Thank you, sweet Eileen, for your encouraging comments! I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: 2/12/2016 9:40:00 AM
tragedy strikes and muses amazing writes so as to keep hope in sight by never giving up the fight against the fears we share day or night....very compelling and inspiring laura....;)
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Date: 2/12/2016 5:28:00 AM
Horrendous image...one that sticks to the reader's mind...A very powerful haiku, Laura. A sure placement!. 7. Best wishes! hugs
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/12/2016 2:14:00 PM
Thank you, Kim, for your encouraging words and I'm really glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 2/11/2016 10:14:00 PM
Such trivial. Very well put Haiku. Lots of Luck in Conrtest. Peace, Love and Joy.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/12/2016 12:11:00 AM
Thank you, John! I appreciate your kind comments:)
Date: 2/11/2016 8:00:00 AM
An excellent Haiku, Laura. Best of luck in the contest. T.J
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/11/2016 5:14:00 PM
Thank you, Teppo. You are very encouraging, and I appreciate it :)
Date: 2/11/2016 12:08:00 AM
a painful end well delivered through your beautiful 'ku, laura...huggs!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/11/2016 12:09:00 AM
Thanks, Nette. So glad you liked it :)
Date: 2/10/2016 9:59:00 PM
Very nice Haiku conjures up an entire story n just 3 short lines
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/11/2016 12:10:00 AM
You think? Thanks, Brian :)
Date: 2/10/2016 9:23:00 PM
this is awesome good luck in the contest! *smiles* -luloo
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/11/2016 12:09:00 AM
Thanks, Laura :)
Date: 2/10/2016 8:52:00 PM
That would be a tempest. Well done, Laura. No telling how many lives have been lost to the seas.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/10/2016 9:15:00 PM
Thanks, Danirl, for your comments. You are certainly right. The sea is a fearsome thing, indeed!