Tempest

cataclysmic waves

                                     awaken sailors' nightmares

                                      last rites claimed by sea







Written on 2/10/2016

oceanhaiku

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/21/2016 2:46:00 PM

Laura, an excellent Haiku. As a Haiku Lover i see this one as a seven and it does go into my faves. Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad.

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/21/2016 2:55:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words, Vladislav! I'm really glad you enjoyed my haiku :)

Beautiful Scars

Date: 3/20/2016 9:56:00 AM

Laura, a lovely haiku, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/20/2016 2:37:00 PM

Thank you, Laura Loo!

Paul Callus

Date: 2/12/2016 4:24:00 PM

Your tempestuous ocean is the burial place for many, Laura; powerful end line! gl in the contest. ~ Regards:) paul

Laura Leiser
Date: 2/21/2016 10:45:00 PM

Thank you, sweet Eileen, for your encouraging comments! I'm glad you liked it :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/12/2016 3:06:00 PM

Striking imagery, dear....Sad last line. Good luck in the contest.

Laura Leiser
Date: 2/12/2016 3:11:00 PM

Thank you, sweet Eileen, for your encouraging comments! I'm glad you liked it :)

Eric Boddie

Date: 2/12/2016 9:40:00 AM

tragedy strikes and muses amazing writes so as to keep hope in sight by never giving up the fight against the fears we share day or night....very compelling and inspiring laura....;)