Temecula

I am now thinking of taking this my gal on drive to shop
fine Temecula with stores and antique shops to buy goods from.
We'll step an aisle soon of Granny's narrow walk and find there some
singular, curious article resting, and we will stop,
giving ourselves to examine the sight of a useless prop.
Many booths each with their baubles to view; can stalls show a plum?
We do think so and search for that elusive short right cloth thrum.
Having success, to another far attic then we will hop.
Rosa's Cantina is for us next serving good Spanish food.
Beans and tortillas, dip for chips to eat with good shredded chuck.
Coke to wash feast down and we are off traveling Hemet's rout.
She does the driving back, I rest and I'm in a happy mood.
Day is gone, finding a right cloth thrum we have had nice good luck.
Fine Temecula with stores and shops, we'll come back little doubt.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Shaw Avatar
July 10, 2017 at 5:34 PM
A well written Rap poem, perhaps would have worked just as well without the F word, but is definitely a good one, regards, Kevin
Berggren Avatar
July 10, 2017 at 9:08 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem.
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