Tell Me Our Love Is Not Lost Among the Midnight Sky

MidNight comes faded beneath my feet,
All is gone above loyalty, love n'
Trust.

What have I done?? Can I regain
The love once lost baby please 
Don't go.

Here you leave me in darkness,
Take my hand and lead me back
To the burning fire.

Among you're eye's that once
Sparked our love so bright, towards
The sun these Tears I Pule
shamelessly.

Tell me I haven't lost you...
I couldn't bare it! Tell me 
You haven't given up??

Please don't leave, my love is:
Still true and pure since the day
We first met.

You mean so much to me, I swear
My love is on A thin line with;
You..I need to know that your
Love still survives,Through me.

Tell me our love is not LoSt among 
The midnight sky.. I honestly love
You!!! Truly no LIES... Baby!! All is
Lost with~out you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/16/2012 1:18:00 PM
Carma, very deep...xox..pd
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 6/16/2012 2:53:00 PM
Thank You!! PD this was written for all lost love... Xoxo Carma
Date: 6/15/2012 9:49:00 PM
Loving someone who OBVIOUSLY LOVES you back is hard to do... or maybe it's easy... but humans are just so hard to understand when we try to trust the words their actions defy <3
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 6/15/2012 10:39:00 PM
Your words so000 true, it is very hard exspecially when I don't know if or when we'll get back to the beginning, thanks for the cheer Up!!! Xoxo Carma
Date: 6/15/2012 3:42:00 PM
Beautiful poem written here Carma!!
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 6/15/2012 4:12:00 PM
Sending soup mail your way,Can you talk... And thanks for the comment. Hugs!!!
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