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Tell Me No Goodbyes

What does "Goodbye" even mean?  
Anyone? Somebody please help me 
Understand this perplexing word 
Suffused with melancholy.  

Goodbye to what? To whom? Me? 
Are you attending my wake?  
Shhh, don't say it as if you don't know  
I'm coming right back! 

Funny how it never sounds less final 
When said even with a smile?
I could never solve the mystery of it. And why
 Do we say it with such pensive eyes?  
 
Tell me no goodbyes 
It's too early for that. I'm still busy living.  
I give you carte blanche to do so  
When you give my eulogy.  

Why trouble my mind with such a word? 
Instead, make my soul smile with 
"See you soon," because you will 
Before sundown. 

I'm not lying dead in an open casket  
Tell me no goodbyes, my dear friend. 
I'm simply heading out. 
I've got an errand to run.


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Date: 04/25/2021

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Date written: 01/09/2021
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Levasseur Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 11:13 AM
Goodbye does resonate permanence. I always say "See you later." Well presented lines of verse with thoughts that drew me in.
Ibeh Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 12:36 PM
Thank you very much for the wonderful visit and feedback, Rob:-)
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