'tell Me, I Can Keep a Secret'

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I have been told I keep a secret well,
oh yes, tell me any deep, dark and personal thing; 
and I will keep it under wraps-  you can trust me,
to keep it in a locked drawer and throw away the key.
Now, tell me everything while I make us tea.

Don't feel shy, we are behind closed doors,
you have my solemn promise I will keep it confidential;
our conversation is top secret and classified,
you have my curiosity-  you must be hiding something serious.
Is it about a secretive lover quite mysterious,
oh do tell, I am starting to get delirious.

Yes, I know you are a very private person,
and like to keep your personal problems to yourself;
but revealing what you have concealed will make you free,
I have known you for years and your life to me is still invisible.
Now, here is your tea and are you cozy-  need a snack,
maybe some wine to loosen your lips a crack;
remember, whatever it is I have your back.

I will sit and listen as you tell me your secret story,
and say nothing except to nod and smile as we go along;
so,  you have a lover you keep on the sly,
and you meet in a secluded place in disguise.
More tea-   and you send each other secret mail,
that you both destroy so there is no message trail;
its my boyfriend!  Okay, tell me each pathetic detail.

___________________________
December 27, 2018


Poetry/Rhyme/'Tell Me, I Can Keep a Secret'
Copyright Protected, ID 18-1098-599-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Contest: Secret
Sponsor: Faraz Ajmal

Third Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 12/30/2018 10:56:00 AM
WoW!BW, I enjoyed this from start to finish. I found it very intriguing I thought to myself" who wants to know her that bad?" Who would have known, you held the secret until very end. Great twist at the end. Congratulations on your 3rd place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/1/2019 9:57:00 PM
Alexis, thanks for the comment and for the congratulations ~
Date: 12/29/2018 4:03:00 PM
Stopping back with congratulations on your win! This is excellent poetry that comes from your heart.
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Date: 1/1/2019 9:57:00 PM
Carolyn, thank you for the visit, compliment and congratulations ~
Date: 12/29/2018 3:36:00 PM
Makes me wonder - what is in that tea? Congratulations on your placement in the contest!
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Date: 1/1/2019 9:58:00 PM
Michelle, thanks for the visit, yes the journey is everything ~
Date: 12/29/2018 1:59:00 PM
Ahh, everyone needs such a friend in life, one who always listens to you and help you, I absolutely love reading this wonderful poem of yours. Many congratulations on your 3rd position in my contest, it sure was a joy to read, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 1/1/2019 9:59:00 PM
Faraz, thanks for the contest and for my fine placement ~
Date: 12/28/2018 11:33:00 AM
This is a winner right from the word go, Constance! You use cajoling words as the perfect key to unlock the lips of the 'secret' holder! Love the ending, and the rhyme scheme. A fav ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 1/1/2019 9:59:00 PM
Paul, thanks for the compliment and the visit ~
Date: 12/28/2018 8:55:00 AM
A tell-all extravaganza along with a bangup ending! Do tell! <3 Kim
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Date: 12/28/2018 9:00:00 AM
Kim, thanks for visiting and for the great comment ~
Date: 12/27/2018 9:41:00 PM
Absolutely terrific entry for the contest, Dear Heart! I was waiting for something starting about halfway through---and you sure delivered it! Huzzah! ~ Gershon
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Date: 12/28/2018 9:00:00 AM
Gershon, thanks for visiting with the terrific, I like that word !
Date: 12/27/2018 8:17:00 AM
I love this poem, but that should be no secret because I will tell anyone who will listen. :) This definitely caught me off guard and had me smiling at the twist at the end. Really creative my friend. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 12/27/2018 4:38:00 PM
Chris thanks for visiting with the love and that nice comment, appreciate ~
Date: 12/27/2018 7:07:00 AM
Gosh, I'm reading this thinking what a great friend you are offering an ear and listening to her woes. Then she turns around and lets you know she's been seeing YOUR boyfriend. I didn't see that coming, Dear Heart. An excellent entry for the contest! Best wishes for success, Carolyn
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Date: 12/27/2018 4:37:00 PM
Carolyn thanks for visiting with the excellent and that nice comment, appreciate ~
Date: 12/27/2018 5:34:00 AM
Thanks for the assurance that trustworthy friends are treasures from the Lord. God bless you.
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Date: 12/27/2018 4:37:00 PM
Beata, thanks for the visit ~
Date: 12/27/2018 3:21:00 AM
a person all-sage...shhh-hell-fish pearls
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Date: 12/27/2018 4:36:00 PM
sand thanks for visiting ~
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