Tell Him This

He thinks
without drinks
  Life stinks

Tell him this
Without drinks
  he thinks
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Neumann Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 3:02 AM
true story ...
Pettit Avatar
February 27, 2021 at 6:46 PM
Great short write about pollution of the soul.
Krutsinger Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 1:10 AM
Sad expose of what drinking does.
Romios Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 3:10 PM
Good one Gershon. It works for non-alcoholics. For those addicted...right thinking requires a whole lot more. Other skilled people. People still think if you are drunk, you tell the truth. Nonsense. Alcohol is a drug not a truth serum. But that fairy tale is still alive. Ugh... Anyone on booze or drugs has "stinking thinking." Pangie
Wolf Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 5:27 PM
Yes, addictions are hard to break, and one can never lapse. People ask me if I smoke. I tell them truthfully that I haven't had a cigarette since September of 1973 -- because it would take just one to get me going again. So you can't quit smoking/alcohol/drugs 'til you're dead, either of natural causes or the addiction. Strength and Willpower, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 8:41 AM
LOL! Well done! The thing is drinks may bring relief to oneself but it hurts those around you!
Wolf Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 5:25 PM
Do you remember how to spell relief from the old TV commercial days: R O L A I D S (flavored rum). lol... Glad I'm not a drinker is all I can say. Bottoms up! ~ Daffy Duck
Gentile Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 8:05 AM
And yet perhaps thinking is what is stinking up his life> Very interesting one Gershon. Also Happy Wine Wednesday !!
Wolf Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 5:23 PM
Ha, ha. Good point, Mike! I'm taking a raincheck on wine Wednesday. Got to be ready for Rum Thursday. lol. Stay sane, man! :) gw
Balasubramanian Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 6:46 AM
Good one. True.
Cunningham Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 1:32 AM
Great advice Gershon and how true. Tom
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