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Tell

If you tell 
      I'll say that you did it.
          And they'll believe me.



2am  4/ 23/ 2013 Mon.

Copyright © Debbie Duncan | Year Posted 2013

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Phyllis Babcock

June 6, 2013 at 9:05 PM

You had me laughing with these antics. A tattle tailer LOL. love phyl

June 6, 2013 at 9:36 PM

Thank you Phyl ;}

Poet Destroyer A

May 2, 2013 at 5:04 PM

Ha ha, I love this Debbie, this is me,,, and I make them all believe,,, witty, and fun.... LINDA

May 2, 2013 at 5:07 PM

thank you Linda, needed a little humor ;}

April 29, 2013 at 5:25 PM

Funny situation you describe here. Sounds like a little blackmail. The economy of words just adds to the suspense I feel. Been very busy the past week. Haven't been here much. But, I relish your comments and visits. I also make it a point to visit you often because (as I may have said before) your poetry rings true.

April 29, 2013 at 11:56 PM

spur of the moment humor ;}

April 28, 2013 at 7:40 AM

Oh Debbie this is a tease, yet so profound,, 14 syllables of sheer inspiration...

April 28, 2013 at 12:05 PM

thank you harry ;}

April 25, 2013 at 2:46 PM

Sounds like a case for Perry Mason. He's sure to break you on the stand. :)

April 26, 2013 at 1:41 AM

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April 24, 2013 at 5:58 AM

hehe...wasn't me...I swear. It was Debbie.

April 24, 2013 at 3:55 PM

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Ravi Sathasivam

April 24, 2013 at 4:42 AM

Sound as a test of true. Nicely written. Enjoyed. Tfs

April 24, 2013 at 4:03 PM

thank you ;}

Laura Breidenthal

April 24, 2013 at 1:26 AM

Oooooh crafty. Nicely written Debbie. :) Always, Laura

April 24, 2013 at 3:55 PM

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Andrea Dietrich

April 24, 2013 at 1:07 AM

very good. It reminds me of some of the movie plots I have seen involving some really conniving people.

April 24, 2013 at 3:30 PM

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April 23, 2013 at 10:28 PM

werent me i didna do it, but like ya anyway...

April 23, 2013 at 10:38 PM

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April 23, 2013 at 10:34 PM

I'll take your word ;}

Lucilla Carrillo

April 23, 2013 at 9:28 PM

Debbie; I won't say nothing. Believe me. ..... Lucilla

April 23, 2013 at 11:12 AM

Sound intriguing!!!!

April 23, 2013 at 3:03 PM

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Anne-Lise Andresen

April 23, 2013 at 9:55 AM

.... Debbie - it was unfair ........... lol - Like it! (but sound just like my sister when we were kids) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

April 23, 2013 at 2:31 PM

I believe you did it Anne ;}

April 23, 2013 at 8:02 AM

A test of true colors' revelation. Nicely done!

April 23, 2013 at 2:20 PM

Oh, yes revelations ;}

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