Teetering On the Brink

I stand on the brink of tomorrow’s joys Listening to the whispering of a gentle mist Kissing the breezes as they come my way, Mulling over how I spent this awesome day, Wondering how much was clamoring noise Echoing through a preoccupied mind I missed, And trying to recall why I came here to stay Mulling over how I spent this awesome day. I peer over the edge at tomorrow’s ploys In my mind reviewing this remarkable list Of plans laid over, huge lumps of pliable clay, Mulling over how I spent this awesome day, Teetering on the brink, clutching my poise, Between today and tomorrow an unseen twist In my attitude, so casual, come-what-may Mulling over how I spent this awesome day.
Written January 13, 2022

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Date: 1/17/2022 3:43:00 AM
I love this "Teetering on the brink, clutching my poise" - great poem Hank.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/17/2022 8:52:00 AM
Thanks, Caren. I was experimenting with an interesting rhyme scheme and refrain. I think it worked out rather well.
Date: 1/14/2022 7:36:00 AM
Milton this is super, certainly made me mull over how I spent my day, a great poem.
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Date: 1/14/2022 8:27:00 AM
Thanks so much, Terry. I really appreciate your comments on my poem.
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