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Teensy and Waiter

Teensy and Waiter And the Red Hasenpfeffer Gracing the world Like a sweet, gentle zephyr Teensy was four while Waiter was five And my little brother knew they were alive Inseparable friends, when he was so small Of course Mom and I Could not see them at all They would often turn up In the strangest of places And could even help fasten Those loosened shoelaces Alternative friends When no friends could be found And neither one Ever uttered a sound And what of that Red Hasenpfeffer, you say Why, he was their bunny Who’d come out to play Yes, Teensy and Waiter, Old friends that were needed To soothe a sad boy When his cries went unheeded In Memory of Jon 2/12/18

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Date: 2/19/2018 3:35:00 PM
Quaint.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/19/2018 8:18:00 PM
Thank you!!
Date: 2/13/2018 3:40:00 PM
Aww...sweet.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/13/2018 6:11:00 PM
Thanks Kim!!
Date: 2/13/2018 3:23:00 PM
these invisible friends are so real to many a child Mike - your touching write gave me a lump in my throat:-( hugs jan xx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/13/2018 6:10:00 PM
Thanks Jan, my brother passed so young a few years ago and I was thinking of him as a child and remembered this xxoo
Date: 2/13/2018 6:35:00 AM
This is really sweet, a lovely dedication..
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/13/2018 8:11:00 AM
Thanks Silent One !!
Date: 2/12/2018 1:49:00 PM
How very sweet Mike! I really love this one!! And I agree with Vijay ... those last two lines were very sad indeed. ~Judy
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/12/2018 2:29:00 PM
Thank you Judy xxoo
Date: 2/12/2018 11:36:00 AM
A captivating write..you kept me going eager to find out what happens next. The ending felt sad...quite touching, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/12/2018 2:29:00 PM
Thank you Vijay !!
Date: 2/12/2018 11:35:00 AM
- A touching poem, Mike - How do you relate to a child having a friend ... that is not visible to us others, but still a part of everyday life - Difficult - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/12/2018 2:28:00 PM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise xxoo

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