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TEENS CAUGHT IN HEADLIGHTS

dusk’s love-locked braces — dad resounds shooting antler off bucks to detach
1/13/2021 Senryu - Humorous, Satirical or Dark Poetry Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Date: 1/16/2021 7:32:00 PM
Wonderful write. Congratulations on your win Kim.
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Date: 1/15/2021 5:29:00 AM
Love it Kim, Congrats on your win!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/15/2021 5:24:00 PM
Thank you, Mark!
Date: 1/15/2021 3:41:00 AM
:))) ... well done, Kim :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/15/2021 3:46:00 AM
Thank you, sweet, lady!
Date: 1/14/2021 6:59:00 PM
ouch ~ vivid. well done, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/15/2021 3:46:00 AM
Thanks, Line!
Date: 1/14/2021 4:02:00 PM
Dropping back with many congrats Kim this was one of my personal favourites:-) hugs jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2021 5:07:00 PM
Thank you so much! Hugs, Jan!
Date: 1/14/2021 1:22:00 PM
cute humor, Kim. congrats.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2021 5:07:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 1/14/2021 12:41:00 PM
Time to get out of town, so visually hilarious Kim, congratulations on win cheers David
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2021 5:08:00 PM
Thank you, David!
Date: 1/14/2021 12:16:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your winning placement with your funny poem!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2021 5:08:00 PM
Thank you, Tania!
Date: 1/13/2021 3:48:00 PM
Ha, ha, Hilarious!! A good laugh to be had by all readers! Thanks, Kim! ~ gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2021 5:37:00 PM
Thanks! So glad you enjoyed the humor!
Date: 1/13/2021 2:44:00 PM
I got a really good laugh out of this one Kim! Many thanks! Linda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2021 3:36:00 PM
So glad...lol!
Date: 1/13/2021 1:25:00 PM
Caught in the act? ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2021 3:37:00 PM
Up to your imagination;)
Date: 1/13/2021 5:37:00 AM
ha ha ha this is priceless and the title is superb just love it Kim!!! so the young buck then scarpers lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2021 5:52:00 AM
I would think so...lol!