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Teens Caught In Headlights

dusk’s love-locked braces —
dad resounds shooting antler
off bucks to detach

1/13/2021
Senryu - Humorous, Satirical or Dark Poetry
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

January 16, 2021 at 7:32 PM

Wonderful write. Congratulations on your win Kim.

January 15, 2021 at 5:29 AM

Love it Kim, Congrats on your win!!

January 15, 2021 at 5:24 PM

Thank you, Mark!

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 15, 2021 at 3:41 AM

:))) ... well done, Kim :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

January 15, 2021 at 3:46 AM

Thank you, sweet, lady!

January 14, 2021 at 6:59 PM

ouch ~ vivid. well done, Kim

January 15, 2021 at 3:46 AM

Thanks, Line!

January 14, 2021 at 4:02 PM

Dropping back with many congrats Kim this was one of my personal favourites:-) hugs jan xx

January 14, 2021 at 5:07 PM

Thank you so much! Hugs, Jan!

Andrea Dietrich

January 14, 2021 at 1:22 PM

cute humor, Kim. congrats.

January 14, 2021 at 5:07 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

January 14, 2021 at 12:41 PM

Time to get out of town, so visually hilarious Kim, congratulations on win cheers David

January 14, 2021 at 5:08 PM

Thank you, David!

January 14, 2021 at 12:16 PM

Kim, congratulations on your winning placement with your funny poem!

January 14, 2021 at 5:08 PM

Thank you, Tania!

January 13, 2021 at 3:48 PM

Ha, ha, Hilarious!! A good laugh to be had by all readers! Thanks, Kim! ~ gw

January 13, 2021 at 5:37 PM

Thanks! So glad you enjoyed the humor!

Linda Alice Fowler

January 13, 2021 at 2:44 PM

I got a really good laugh out of this one Kim! Many thanks! Linda

January 13, 2021 at 3:36 PM

So glad...lol!

Victor Buhagiar

January 13, 2021 at 1:25 PM

Caught in the act? ~~

January 13, 2021 at 3:37 PM

Up to your imagination;)

January 13, 2021 at 5:37 AM

ha ha ha this is priceless and the title is superb just love it Kim!!! so the young buck then scarpers lol:-) hugs jan xx

January 13, 2021 at 5:52 AM

I would think so...lol!

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