Teendream

hanging out
that’s what we do
pondering glory and greatness,
drinking nostalgia from a plastic cup 

that clock ticks,
that song plays,
cross our t’s and dot our i’s
play fast and loose
eagerly feel up life

say we won’t look back,
but do it when we think no one’s looking

slip, swallow, sing, startle, emerge
try our very hardest to be unique

and close our eyes so tight 
that the blackness deepens around us

make our bodies a smile,
open, and begin again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 10, 2016 at 10:51 AM
awesome poem. Love LINDA
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June 3, 2010 at 8:19 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Madison. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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June 3, 2010 at 7:58 AM
Congrats for your wonderful and sweet poem cheers suresh
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June 3, 2010 at 5:16 AM
Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem making it through the first round, keep your pens flowing with passion. Wishing you all the best in the finals You are such a great writer… love Leke
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May 31, 2010 at 1:56 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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April 29, 2010 at 5:10 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured.
Brown Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 7:35 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Madison. Love, Carol
Austin Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 7:08 AM
You're either very old or very young. Anyhow, I like your style. Congrats on the write. Love, daver
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April 26, 2010 at 10:52 AM
Many congratulations on having your poetry featured >> James
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