3/4/2025 for Open 11 Poetry Contest sponsored by Charlotte Puddifoot
Caught by surprise one sunny day, a neighbor's friendly voice said "Hi" as I was passing by her garden's flower spray. Upon hearing that simple word, it came together in that place, a lovely garden, a pretty face, and something in my heart stirred. Kind friend, strangely, it appears I've gone all silly and soft. My spirit was borne aloft. It's been so many years. 'Twas a glad moment of rebirth, but how can I engage in love at my old age? I know I must return to earth. Yet, for a moment, so insane, I begged her pardon, gave a flower for her garden, and felt teenage love again.
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