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3/4/2025 for Open 11 Poetry Contest sponsored by Charlotte Puddifoot

Caught by surprise one sunny day, a neighbor's friendly voice said "Hi" as I was passing by her garden's flower spray. Upon hearing that simple word, it came together in that place, a lovely garden, a pretty face, and something in my heart stirred. Kind friend, strangely, it appears I've gone all silly and soft. My spirit was borne aloft. It's been so many years. 'Twas a glad moment of rebirth, but how can I engage in love at my old age? I know I must return to earth.    Yet, for a moment, so insane, I begged her pardon, gave a flower for her garden, and felt teenage love again.

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Date: 3/5/2025 1:14:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your fun write. Age is only a number. So be a teenage in love again. Have a fun day writing away..........
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David Crandall
Date: 3/5/2025 1:42:00 PM
Thanks Paula, a big number...haha - lol!
Date: 3/4/2025 8:33:00 PM
Is there a law that you have to feel old? I like this story but sorry for the time you miss.
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Date: 3/5/2025 7:54:00 AM
Thanks for the thought, Hilda!
Date: 3/4/2025 6:34:00 PM
Wonderful write Dave. Love always makes us feel younger again. Too bad our older bodies cant take that for too long!
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David Crandall
Date: 3/4/2025 6:38:00 PM
haha, thanks Oliver, yep, that's the way it goes...or should I say, that's the way it went - lol!

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