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3/4/2025 for Open 11 Poetry Contest sponsored by Charlotte Puddifoot

Teenager for a Day

Caught by surprise one sunny day,
a neighbor's friendly voice said "Hi"
as I was passing by
her garden's flower spray.

Upon hearing that simple word,
it came together in that place,
a lovely garden, a pretty face,
and something in my heart stirred.

Kind friend, strangely, it appears
I've gone all silly and soft.
My spirit was borne aloft.
It's been so many years.

'Twas a glad moment of rebirth,
but how can I engage
in love at my old age?
I know I must return to earth.
  
Yet, for a moment, so insane,
I begged her pardon,
gave a flower for her garden,
and felt teenage love again.
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Goldsmith Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 1:14 PM
I enjoyed reading your fun write. Age is only a number. So be a teenage in love again. Have a fun day writing away..........
Crandall Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 1:42 PM
Thanks Paula, a big number...haha - lol!
Greenhough Avatar
March 4, 2025 at 8:33 PM
Is there a law that you have to feel old? I like this story but sorry for the time you miss.
Crandall Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 7:54 AM
Thanks for the thought, Hilda!
Mckeithan Avatar
March 4, 2025 at 6:34 PM
Wonderful write Dave. Love always makes us feel younger again. Too bad our older bodies cant take that for too long!
Crandall Avatar
March 4, 2025 at 6:38 PM
haha, thanks Oliver, yep, that's the way it goes...or should I say, that's the way it went - lol!
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