Teenager

Kid's room. Needs broom.

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Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 7/1/2018 5:37:00 AM

This really tickled me,so clever. Brought back memories of when my son was an untidy teenager.Thanks for this Jean.

Jean Murray
Date: 7/1/2018 8:02:00 AM

Thank you for your empathy Sylvia.

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/28/2018 3:52:00 PM

Absolutely! A wonderful Footle Jean. Belated congratulations on your first place win.. Warmest wishes ~Susan

Jean Murray
Date: 1/28/2018 5:45:00 PM

Thank you Susan. Always lovely to hear from you.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 12/9/2017 4:33:00 PM

Congratulations on your Footle win, Jean - blessings, friend! :-)

Jean Murray
Date: 12/9/2017 5:26:00 PM

Thank you Greg.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/2/2017 3:07:00 PM

- Well done, Jean ... and I see it got a great win ... 1st place !!! - Congratulations !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray
Date: 12/2/2017 4:17:00 PM

I hug you back in thanks Sunshine.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/27/2017 6:49:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats jean Hope your daughter had a wonderful holiday - we always stay in Sliema when we go to Malta!!:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray
Date: 11/28/2017 3:23:00 AM

Morning Jan. Thank you. Isn't the weather miserable? I never got to sweep up my leaves that last dry spell and my driveway is a mess. She enjoyed the trip very much.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/27/2017 3:37:00 PM

I LOVE this. I hope it scored high for you, Congratulations.

Jean Murray
Date: 11/27/2017 4:24:00 PM

I'm next to you on the podium Andrea.

Bartholomew Williams

Date: 11/27/2017 1:23:00 PM

Very well done, Jean. I can definitely relate! Congratulations to you on your first-place winner!! :) Bartholomew

Jean Murray
Date: 11/27/2017 4:24:00 PM

Thank you Bartholomew.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/27/2017 12:37:00 PM

I loved this one Jean! So happy to see it get first place! Congratulations! : )

Jean Murray
Date: 11/27/2017 4:23:00 PM

That's nice of you Connie. Thank you.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/27/2017 10:20:00 AM

Congrats!

Jean Murray
Date: 11/27/2017 11:12:00 AM

Thank you Kim.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/27/2017 9:52:00 AM

Most parents will tend to agree with you on this one, Jean! A very good footle...congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul ... from Malta:) (not ideal for swimming, today)

Jean Murray
Date: 11/27/2017 11:06:00 AM

They all swam every day! That's the Irish for you.

Jean Murray
Date: 11/27/2017 11:03:00 AM

Thank you Paul. I am just off the phone to my eldest daughter chatting about her trip there at the weekend, with my other two daughters and their Dad. The weather was lovely as you know, and they had a lovely time based in Silema.

Barry Stebbings

Date: 11/27/2017 6:59:00 AM

Oh, so familiar. Congratulations, Jean. // Barry

Jean Murray
Date: 11/27/2017 9:30:00 AM

Thank you Barry.

Viv Wigley

Date: 11/27/2017 6:22:00 AM

.....and back ,unsurprisingly, to give congratulations, Jean, well done! Viv x

Jean Murray
Date: 11/27/2017 9:30:00 AM

Thank you Viv! And I must also thank my inspiration, my daughter Rena.

Viv Wigley

Date: 11/26/2017 2:46:00 AM

In my case, Jean when I was young it would have been 'Kids hovel needs shovel'. Fun write, good luck, Viv x

Jean Murray
Date: 11/26/2017 5:09:00 AM

You're so funny Viv. Thanks for the memory.

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 11/22/2017 8:29:00 AM

GOTD! nice footl'n ~ j

Jean Murray
Date: 11/23/2017 5:41:00 AM

That's enough of an honour for me John.

Tim Smith

Date: 11/22/2017 8:11:00 AM

No luck...awe f#@*... she'll have to purchase one there

Jean Murray
Date: 11/23/2017 5:40:00 AM

My thoughts exactly!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/21/2017 8:42:00 PM

LOL hilarious!!!!!!!

Jean Murray
Date: 11/22/2017 3:11:00 AM

It would be fun if I didn't now have to replace the hundreds of items I had to spill out on the floor last night in search of Rena's elusive red polka dot bikini. The yellow one had become too itsy bitsy teenie weenie she said. No luck!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/21/2017 7:40:00 PM

Boy you can say that again! I once followed a trail of ants right into the closet where my daughter had left candy in her back pack. I love your cute footle Jean! : )

Jean Murray
Date: 11/21/2017 8:21:00 PM

Thank you Connie. Scariest of all was finding a bag full of Rena's old hair extensions.

Kevin Shaw

Date: 11/21/2017 5:34:00 PM

Yes that's true, regards, Kevin X

Jean Murray
Date: 11/21/2017 6:04:00 PM

Hi Kevin. Thank you for stopping by to sympathise.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/21/2017 4:40:00 PM

lol love it:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray
Date: 11/21/2017 4:49:00 PM

Hi Jan. I was sitting here scratching my head trying to think of something when I got a call from my baby, Rena. She is looking for a red polka dot bikini to send to Dublin on the bus at 8:30am for a trip to Malta on Thursday. Neither of us know it's whereabouts however....