Teenage Temptations Footles


hot teen
he's keen

fog's in
no sin

parked car
see stars

soft tunes
he croons

french kiss
hot miss

neck marks
so dark

his lips
lush grips

glass steams
my dream




       September 27, 2020
          9:30am PST

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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James Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 2:34 PM
the younger days of romance comes back to mind. Love the footle form and love yours. Emilia : )
Romios Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 2:48 PM
Emilia..reading the comments brings back things I forgot. Hope all going well across the pond...heard the UK might go in for another lockdown? In CA, we have been under lockdown since March 31? Quite noxious to me. Pangiexx
Krutsinger Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 11:14 AM
Those steamed up windows came clouding back as I read this.
Romios Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 11:55 AM
Ditto....I forgot that part! Pangie xxx
Watt Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 10:38 AM
Those foggy nights can sure be romantic in the back seat of a car. Or a rainy night when nobody is bound to be walking around looking in the windows! I'm afraid I don't have any car memories to relive (my car was too small!) but I have some back row of the movie theater moments, huzza huzza. Thanks for the stroll, Pangie. You really rock at these footles. Hugs ~ John
Romios Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 10:57 AM
This was in the front seat, John. Being raised a Catholic, no going in the back seat.-)) I forgot about the rain being a perfect cover. In the Midwest....snow is even better. I liked his lips ..lush grips. I wasn't wild at all. That came decades later, with the belly dancing.LOL... Movies I am old enough to remember drive in movies,huzza huzza.. Will give "footledom" a rest for few days. ))Thanks for reading them, John. Merci, Panagiotaxx
Cunningham Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 6:25 AM
That last one, steamy car windows lol. Great footles, You got me writing some now. Tom
Romios Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 9:27 AM
Steamy car windows....)))) oh great ...you are writing some! Can't wait...you are a wit! Hugs, Pangie xx
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