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Teenage Nose Job

Nose job

nasal piercing; yeuk! more suitable for cattle what a silly moo! Written after I saw a teenager with a large metal ring through her septum. I can understand ear piercing but the thought of a stud or ring in my nose ... yeuk, but each to their own 3/7/18
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Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 3:01 PM
Yes, it IS so stupid, Jan. I love the way you compared it to the cow.
Allison Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 1:09 AM
I couldn't resist andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Bauer Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 2:52 PM
i agree, jan! there's something very uncomfortable about the way that looks, but maybe if i were younger, i'd understand it more (although i doubt it!)
Allison Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 1:08 AM
I just don't understand it or the need to have those massive holes in the earlobe ... it may be fashionable but I don't find it at all attractive:-) hugs Jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 1:26 PM
I was just wondering , how does she blow her nose, cant be very nice if your out in public and you've got mucus hanging from your nostrils, Yuck.
Allison Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 1:07 AM
I have the same thoughts tom:-( yeuky! Hugs Jan xx
Talbot Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 11:56 AM
Never understood body piercing full stop, earrings, and studs, fine, but the discs they have inserted in their lobes, why? Very apt the senryu... hugs... Mick
Allison Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 1:01 PM
Yeuky Mick those ear discs make my hubby feel sick ... There is something about them that makes him feel uncomfortable:-( hugs Jan xx
Turner Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 11:55 AM
I agree, Jan. Rings are for fingers not for noses.
Allison Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 12:35 PM
Absolutely correct DT I can't agree more, I can't see a man saying oh let me slip this ring... through your nose lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Wanter Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 10:41 AM
Good one, Jan! I'm with you! Ouch!
Allison Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 10:50 AM
It's not something I would have done lol... just imagine wear g it when you have a cold:-( hugs Jan xx
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