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Teen Passion

TEEN PASSION As we walk along the path of a nearby valley, Teenagers in love, where the laden fruit trees shake out Their shadows onto the green luscious grass, we feel the Sheer ecstasy of the moment, is there anywhere else I would rather be than with you, in an unpeopled Place, where the sweetest of meadows mesmerizes Us, and the mating song of birds, stays in tune With our mounting passion. The sunlight filters through The orchard whose ripe intoxicating aroma is for the Taking, as are you and I, we feel encompassed by nature, Drenched in the enormity of the beauty around us, our Hands clenched in a sweaty clasp, entranced, our heightened, Ardour now screeching for one another’s attention, We lay down, urgently, impulsively, body and soul excited and Apprehensive, longing for what is to come, We passionately embrace, our lips touch, such blissful Love we made, lying naked allowing the breeze To ripple across us, we once again embrace, only to be Brought back to reality by my father’s far away voice, “Afternoon tea is ready, come and get it kids”

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Date: 11/30/2019 11:36:00 PM
Hello Jennifer ... young love and romance makes everything us appear to be paradise - once again, thank you Jennifer - Lindsay
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Date: 12/1/2019 12:07:00 PM
It certainly does Lindsay, but I stretched my imagination a trifle on this - my Dad was always in the Wings! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 11/28/2019 7:33:00 PM
Move to America -- no tea time -- and make love forever! Thanks, Jennifer: This one brought quite a smile to my face. Peace and Joy, Gershon
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Date: 11/30/2019 10:27:00 AM
Make love not war - a famous slogan during the early seventies - my Dad certainly did not approve, too British what what! I loved him to bits and pieces but my of my, was he strict! Yet People all over the world celebrate this era with a party (not tea parties) and dress up like them! I was one of the first to buy bell bottom slacks - we lived in Zambia at the time. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 11/26/2019 11:03:00 PM
This is so full of the passionate Romeo and Juliet intensity, it is breathtaking!
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Date: 11/27/2019 8:30:00 AM
This is a very cool awesome comment, thank-you Michelle. Coming from a poetess such as yourself, I take that as a huge compliment. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 11/26/2019 9:02:00 PM
LOL. Jeenn.i had to wait later in my years to let go. With 12 years of Catholic teaching, I was quite shy as a teen. I must be a ver late bloomer. My Dad was like yours...constantly watching over me. Panagiota
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Date: 11/27/2019 8:27:00 AM
Hi Panagiota, I only did my High School at the Dominican Convent - but I see you did all you schooling at such a school. I have wonderful memories of the Convent I went to. My Dad was the strictest Dad ever, but oh did I love him!. Thanks for commenting my friend. Hugs, Jenn.
Date: 11/25/2019 10:57:00 PM
Romance for a teen is always more memorable. That first kiss makes such a deep impression. I love that your father was always keeping a watchful eye on you. That is the best kind of parental love. I enjoyed your passionate story Jennifer. xxoo
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Date: 11/26/2019 3:59:00 AM
I'm sure it was much the same for all our age at the time, our parents were strict, but loved them all the more for it. Thank you for a great comment and understanding Connie. Love and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 11/25/2019 2:30:00 PM
Hi Jennifer, I enjoyed this romantic write. I think everyone has thought of a passionate roll in the hay "outdoors". If I didn't think about "getting caught (like in this well written write)mosquitos, or a bear or some other wild animal , I would actually be up for it. I enjoyed the read. Happy Holidays and have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/26/2019 3:54:00 AM
I'm sure they have, but I was brought up too strictly for something like this to happen, but glad you enjoyed the read, it was just fiction! Just sounded like my dad actually was, at the end of the poem, but loved him all the more for it. Teenagers, such a randy age. Hugs and blessings dear Alexis. Jenny.
Date: 11/25/2019 9:17:00 AM
Oh my! Poor timing *lol*. There is something intoxicating about making love outdoors. The danger of being caught enhances the experience.
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Date: 11/26/2019 3:46:00 AM
It was just the poem that was adventurous, not me, but teen imaginations are rife, my father was always too strict and had a watchful eye on his daughter always, but glad you enjoyed it Richard . Dad did call at the wrong time though, I wanted to make the poem sound real! Hugs and blessings, Jenn.
Date: 11/25/2019 5:38:00 AM
Beautifully done! So very well written! A fav for me!;)
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Date: 11/25/2019 11:55:00 PM
Lol thank you!;)
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Date: 11/25/2019 7:09:00 AM
Coming from you my friend, one of the queens of romantic poems, I take this as a great compliment - thank you Brenda. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 11/25/2019 1:24:00 AM
Lovely dear friend. I enjoyed reading and wish you many more wonderful poems. Love to you always, Gina
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Date: 11/25/2019 7:10:00 AM
Thank-you Gina, you are always such a sweetheart with your comments - bless you. Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 11/24/2019 10:35:00 PM
Jennifer, The passion feels so tangible in this poem. Enjoyed the magical teen tea too. -Richard
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Date: 11/24/2019 10:45:00 PM
It was a teens first encounter as I thought it would be, my father was ever too strict to let me wander too far away with a boy into the meadows, as you can understand from the last two lines, always knew where his daughter was , my first date was when I was eighteen. Loved your comment. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 11/24/2019 8:39:00 PM
such a great write Jennifer, the scene so vivid, the passion in the moment of that kiss... you brought this one to life wonderfully... hugs
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Date: 11/24/2019 10:39:00 PM
Thank-you Sandy, I wanted to portray how teenagers sometimes think, but it was with the ink of an adult pen. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, I had to have the setting right for their first encounter of love! Thank-you for your support Sandy, much appreciated. Hugs and blessings, Jenny.
Date: 11/24/2019 3:26:00 PM
I love how you set the scenery here for this passionate encounter, although it was just one kiss, it was a passionate one.. dads are great always looking out for their girls.. im the same... well done to your dad! It was just a dream or you thinking it, right?
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Date: 11/24/2019 10:33:00 PM
Absolutely SO I went on my first date when I was eighteen and had a first secret kiss at fifeteen, my father was the most wonderful man on this planet - we were very close, but he was strict, even now I know, he is my guardian angel, he died young at 66 from bronchial cancer and broke my heart!. My poem was fiction, a teen mind but written by an adult poet! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 11/24/2019 11:03:00 AM
Woooh... It was powerful... and I felt like someone threw cold water on us... lol... smiles... excellent write. Ann
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Date: 11/24/2019 11:56:00 AM
Hi Ann, you made me laugh so much, glad it had that effect though! Thank-you for your comment, I needed a laugh today! Hugs and blessings Jenny.
Date: 11/24/2019 9:02:00 AM
Oh my, Jenn, quite a sensual poem this is. I can still recall these exciting moments learning about love, thanks for bringing back the memories. All the best my dear friend. John
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Date: 11/24/2019 12:09:00 PM
Hi John, I guess it is, but Dad must have sensed we were gone too long! We all have memories of teen love. My Dad was always very strict with me, so there is a little salt and pepper added to this write - I'm glad you enjoyed it my friend. Thank-you for a great comment. Hugs and blessings, Jenn.
Date: 11/24/2019 7:30:00 AM
- Lovely to read about sweet romance my friend :) - Love it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/24/2019 12:16:00 PM
Thank-you my dear friend Anne-Lise - My muse urged me to write this romantic poem - glad you enjoyed it my friend. Teen, or puppy love as some call it, is something we all go through. Hugs and blessings, Jenny.
Date: 11/24/2019 7:02:00 AM
Happy Thanksgiving!!, another great written poem very romantic well done Sis!!
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Date: 11/24/2019 12:19:00 PM
Happy Thanksgiving to you dear friend - unfortunately in South Africa we don't have Thanksgiving - I wish we did though - glad you enjoyed my poem Bobby. Hugs and Blessings Jenn.
Date: 11/24/2019 6:58:00 AM
Poetry from the pen of a passionate writer sounds rhythmic even in prose. Enjoyed reading your story about teen love--we can all relate to those tender moments you describe--splendidly done, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/24/2019 12:28:00 PM
Thank-you for the compliment Vijay, coming from you it means a great deal! We all had a love in our teens, the above is merely poetry but there was a special boy who wanted to marry me (both sixteen) and take me back to Scotland with his family. Both his and my parents had to explain to him very politely, that it would not be possible! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 11/24/2019 3:33:00 AM
Hi Jennifer simply breath taking. Isnt it great to be able to daydream. Thanks for sharing. Happy Thanksgiving
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Date: 11/24/2019 12:36:00 PM
Hi Greg., My father kept close tabs on his daughter, he was in fact very strict with me and I wasn't allowed to date until I was eighteen. Glad you enjoyed. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

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