Technicolor Skywriting

Maître peintre of exulted hallelujahs 
   skywriting's vastly delusional vapors,
whitewashed of stained looking-glass 
     flourished in atmospherical cloudbursts,
beyond hallucinations' unearthly enlightenment
   dreamt 'pon released chimerical technicolor



(Maître peintre - master painter)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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October 23, 2016 at 12:09 AM
Beautifully expressed poem, Paloma. Supremely vivid imagery. Kudos! What does maitre peintre mean? Ty for dropping the knowledge. Lovely pen strokes of a consummate poetess. Ty for sharing. Love always, my dear friend. RW
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October 21, 2016 at 9:07 AM
I can see the writing upon the blue skies outside my window. What a brilliantly written and alluring poem. This felt nice to read this morning.
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October 21, 2016 at 10:12 AM
Heaven shines upon you and your poetry. :) Many thanks Chris.
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October 21, 2016 at 5:17 AM
Almost lifted from beautiful chimerical prism to add colors to our black and white reality ...' Maître peintre' with words ...
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October 21, 2016 at 5:39 AM
So kind of you to say Probir, many thanks for your picturesque critique.
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