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Teasingly Spoke

Listening to sweet melodies sung on a gentle breeze Dancing in the cosmos on this chilled winters eve Gazing at the beauty, up in the night skies Knowing starlights twinkle shown in your eyes Breathless whispers echo of something so brand new Telling of two hearts glistening in the morning dew Awakening deep emotions in this reality Visions left wide open to gaze at all possibilities While riding that breeze so soft and so sweet It's on the rivers edge where the two shall meet Intoxicating waves flow with audacious style Caressing submissive curves with seductive guile Speaking in abstract metaphors and synonyms Perfect verses whilst hearts race from adrenaline Floating high gracefully searching release to provoke Words touch vibrating as they teasingly spoke
1st place in Brian Strands Contest 2/6/2020

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Date: 2/9/2020 1:07:00 PM
You tease with sensuality and passion, Brenda. A pleasure to read. ~ Warm regards, my friend.// paul
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/11/2020 12:55:00 AM
Ahh paul thank you my friend!;)
Date: 2/8/2020 10:37:00 AM
beautiful and sensual write Brenda, congrats on your top win :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/9/2020 4:20:00 AM
Sandy you are too kind thank you!;)
Date: 2/7/2020 11:39:00 AM
As always, lyrical and lovely--congrats!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/9/2020 4:20:00 AM
LJ thanks so much!;)
Date: 2/7/2020 5:11:00 AM
I do love your style Brenda, its appears that when you write, you create magic, congratulations on your first place win, Brave the years, and stay beautiful my dear friend. xo
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/9/2020 4:19:00 AM
Ahh pixie thank you! I appreciate your words!;)
Date: 2/7/2020 4:24:00 AM
Beautiful. Exquisite. Kind wishes, Kai
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/9/2020 4:19:00 AM
Thank you so much!;)
Date: 2/6/2020 11:03:00 PM
Brenda, I second that emotion. No teasing, just pleasing in your poem. -Richard
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/6/2020 11:56:00 PM
Richard lol thank you so very much! ;)
Date: 2/6/2020 9:56:00 PM
Brenda Chiri, congratulations on your First Place. A worthy poem for all to enjoy. ~ Sonia
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/6/2020 10:02:00 PM
Thank you so much!;)
Date: 2/6/2020 8:00:00 PM
I have just nominated you for membership into the rhymers club...there will be no dissenting voices I am certain. Really quite enchanting, Poetess. Serene -- but imbued with a most appealing vibrance! Lots of affection as always. :) john P.s And another inevitable first place I see. :) good for you!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/6/2020 8:47:00 PM
Ahh John lol! Thank you so much! You know I look forward to your comments!;) and this one brought a big smile to my face! I so appreciate you my dear!;) hugs;)!
Date: 2/6/2020 6:51:00 PM
Congrats on the win I see you got with this one. It's so sweet and sensuous at the same time.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/6/2020 8:46:00 PM
Andrea thank you so very much!
Date: 2/6/2020 5:20:00 PM
Lovely penning Brenda, such good expression and insightful thought. Nice imagery and sensuality , beautiful indeed! Hope all good with you, Blessings and hugs,Gordon
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/6/2020 8:45:00 PM
Gordon thank you! And yes things are going really good for me if late! ;)
Date: 2/6/2020 4:42:00 PM
Congratulations on another first place Brenda :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/6/2020 8:45:00 PM
Gary thx so very much!;)
Date: 2/6/2020 4:16:00 PM
Always tender and teasing--in depth of love--lovely as ever Brenda! No wonder you always win at the TOP. Congrats on yet another first place.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/6/2020 8:44:00 PM
Lol Vijay thank you so much! It's quite a change from when I was on here before huh!? ;)
Date: 2/6/2020 7:37:00 AM
- Gorgeous ... easy to love, Brenda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/6/2020 8:02:00 AM
Anne-Lise thank you so very much!;)

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