Debra Squyres Poet Free verse

Teasing Threads of Thought

My mind is a jumble of thoughts today....

 like a million pieces of thread all twisted up in a ball
 tangled beyond hope of finding release
 Colorful ends dangling here and there

 Teasing .... Pull here! Pull here!
 A jester laughs .... in a court of no hope.

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Richard Lamoureux November 17, 2012 at 2:24 PM Past and present connected by colorful thread, who knows what we will find connected to the other end??? I love this idea, very creative.

Carol Sunshine Brown August 9, 2012 at 10:32 AM A well deserved win for you in the #193 contest. Congratulations Debra. Love, Carol

Robert Johnson August 6, 2012 at 8:54 PM Congrats on your first place win Debra. It is truly a glimpse into a poets dry spell. Cobwebs and all.

Phyllis Babcock August 5, 2012 at 1:37 PM Awesome write on this poem Debra. Congrats on your big win. love phyl

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders August 5, 2012 at 11:25 AM Love this!! Congrats on another fantastic win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich August 3, 2012 at 7:26 PM what a marvelous itty bitty poem this is. Big congrats for your high placed win, Debra.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 3, 2012 at 8:17 AM Congratulations Debra xx

Sherese Gooden August 2, 2012 at 11:15 PM congrats Debbie.

Barbara Gorelick August 2, 2012 at 9:51 AM This is deep!..I love it..congrats on your win. BG

Carol Sunshine Brown August 2, 2012 at 5:41 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#193" contest Debra. Love, Carol

Rachel St.Cross July 31, 2012 at 11:07 AM ‡ Well That's A Pretty Gray In Somber's Court, Sweet Beautiful Lady * Aside From This Observation Its Seems, This, Is Quite An Excellent Poem Brushed Amid Depthful & Wonderful Images; Kudos ... My Luv, Rachel ‡

Robert Johnson July 31, 2012 at 9:13 AM A glimpse, a glimmer, a shadow of doubt. This is what living is all about. To enter tomorrow, we must live today. To end all the sorrow and catch the sun's rays.