Tease

secure
in the advantage : submission
(the natural eye sees upsidedown)
                                  vulnerable - in
                                      tangible - don't
see me for what i do but who i am
       separate     (sanctity from sanity)
please is ---------------- a tease with
                       bent knees with
              a mouth that foams, hangs open,
              ---------------------- alone ---------
come home, she cried, that night,
just before he ---- died --- despite
(quite                          creative)
         (com)motion diluted in----oh, sense,
                                              begging for
                                 betrayal
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 3:32 PM
Interesting style and design..Sara
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