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Teary Eyes Wanda

Wanda's eyes were teary All day she felt that way So badly she wanted to cry The tears would not come She did not know the reason why When it was bed time Upon her bed she laid With her head upon the pillow Laying awake for hours Wondering why she felt this way No answer came to her Tossing and turning All through the evening Until she fell asleep A little break from teary eyes Is what she needed That is when the tears Began to roll down from her eyes She tried to stop-tears streamed down Until all the tears had cease Feeling better after a good cry

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Date: 8/23/2017 3:43:00 PM
I liked this heartfelt story, Darlene. It usually does feel better after a good squirt. A good sleep helps too like you wrote. Nice poem. Love always.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/26/2017 1:09:00 PM
It is always good to have a good cry,it seems to make the person feel better.Better to let go of the feelings that hurt you that way. Love always to you as well Freddie.
Date: 7/14/2017 1:39:00 PM
I'm glad you feel better after a good cry. Now dry your eyes and give me a smile.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/23/2017 2:39:00 PM
You have my smile. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 7/14/2017 1:39:00 PM
I'm glad you feel better after a good cry. Now dry your eyes and give me a smile.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/23/2017 2:40:00 PM
Yes I smile now. Have a good day my friend.
Date: 6/6/2017 1:19:00 PM
A very beautiful written poem, it s really true that after a cry you started to feel much better, never stop your tears from coming, however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/27/2017 2:25:00 PM
Hello Faraz,Yes I always feel good after a good cry. When i am upset.I have already done some comments on your poetry. I will do more. These are my honest opinions.
Date: 5/11/2017 6:43:00 PM
We all need, hurt, feel pain, cry, love, and laugh...that's what humans do. A tear can mean so much in the mind of the holder of that tear...overwhelming joy, pride, hurt, pain, compassion and frustration all these emotions have, and continue, to take up residency within the human tear. To cry is to be alive and to feel! Emile.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/14/2017 11:40:00 AM
Hello Emile,Yes I agree with what have said.I am feeling teary eye today, I don't know why. I will feel better later.
Date: 5/8/2017 8:47:00 AM
Excellent. Very touching write. Thanks for sharing it.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/10/2017 9:13:00 AM
Thank you Ravi, I enjoyed to write this poem. Nice to meet you.
Date: 5/6/2017 11:46:00 AM
Hi Darlene , the world needs to cry more, God knows there is enough reasons ,, love your write :))) hugs
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/7/2017 8:38:00 AM
Hello Niall, I agree the world needs to cry more. Thank you. I also like your write. Hugs.
Date: 5/5/2017 5:55:00 AM
Hi Darlene, I agree with the ladies below, peace comes after a good cry. You expressed that fact very well in this piece. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/5/2017 1:20:00 PM
I do to it is good to have a good cry now and then. It makes you feel a whole lot better after.
Date: 5/5/2017 3:06:00 AM
Yes, peace comes when we are all cried out. I understand this poem well. Thanks for sharing
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/5/2017 1:21:00 PM
It looks like you and I have shed a lot of tears. I know that I feel better after a good cry.
Date: 5/4/2017 9:04:00 PM
It's very good sometimes to just have a GOOD CRY. I enjoyed this one, Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/5/2017 1:23:00 PM
Yes it is good to have a good cry now and then,it makes you feel a whole ,lot better.

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