Tears We Have Smiled

In the Joyous occasion of the Birth of a Child
Vigorously We Flow, as a Stream in the Wild
We Sparkle and Shine :  to those WE Beguiled
Creating a Pond, from the “Tears we have Smiled”

ALL My LOVE : Always and FOREVER…HG ( Harry )

                           To Be Continued

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Elaine George

Date: 3/31/2011 6:31:00 PM

Absolutely brilliant, dear Harry. Another to go to my favorite list. Love, Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/20/2011 7:46:00 PM

Perfection of rhyme and emotional conveyed HG my silent beau... lovely lines lilting across the page to beguile readeers like your "Sweetheart" forever and always luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/20/2011 2:27:00 PM

I like the begining and Im sure the ending will be just as nice..