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suppressing unexpressed hurt, rivers of tears uncried. she's nursing a heart cleaved in two; prince charming deep-sixed her. she's been replaced with new girl he met on the sly. she's too numb to feel the... pain... that everyone sees. (yalto) "Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly Line 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE(28) any theme any form contest (Winner: 1st Place) Sponsored by Brian Strand Date written: 10/16/2020

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Date: 10/20/2020 6:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I may try a Yalto; it is a really nice cadence.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/20/2020 6:47:00 AM
Thanks! Give it a try, Caren:-) I can't wait to see the gem you come up with!
Date: 10/18/2020 10:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. A life is filled with tears. (Both good and sad.) Enjoy your day and win...........
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/18/2020 12:12:00 PM
Thank you very much, Paula:-)
Date: 10/18/2020 9:33:00 AM
Congrats Edward to win TOP.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/18/2020 12:11:00 PM
Thank you, Anisha:-)
Date: 10/17/2020 11:27:00 PM
Very sensitive and unique form.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/18/2020 4:01:00 AM
Thank you so much, Linda:-) God bless.
Date: 10/17/2020 10:18:00 AM
Well written Edward :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/17/2020 11:13:00 AM
Thank you so much, Heidi:-)
Date: 10/17/2020 5:31:00 AM
Tears of break up hurt even more when she can't cry--well done Edward in your lovely form.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/17/2020 5:37:00 AM
So true! Thank you very much, Vijay:-) Enjoy your weekend, my friend.

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