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Tears Tell God

just behind my eye's under my eye lids sometimes tinkle two tears armed and fully loaded ready at any notice to spring forth and fall out one soldier for each eye a voluntary army set to moisturize at a moment when ears may hear or eye's see or thoughts confirm that sadness will occur for sadness is a war one has with one's self concluding that there is no hope left no way out tears come forth with scream and shout my soul has been angered and cries out to it's God eye's telling secrets concealed by the tongue deep in a soul a bell has been rung signaling soldiers to run soldiers run you have a sacred duty to both soul and self go tell God, tell God tell God By John H. Loving III

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/26/2011 4:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest John III. I am sorry for the late comment but still having problems with the Soup since they worked on it. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/25/2011 7:45:00 AM
Hello friend. A warm congrats on a most well deserved win. Your comment made me smile, most appreciated. Thank you for stopping by. Hope you had a wonderful Easter. All the best, shar
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Date: 4/22/2011 1:50:00 PM
Hey there John, congratulations on your win in the contest ;)
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Date: 4/22/2011 1:05:00 PM
well congratulations Sir John and thank you for keeping me company at the bottom of the winners' list, I'm so glad we're down there together haha
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Date: 4/22/2011 12:22:00 PM
Great to see you in the winner's list, John. Congratulations on your poem's success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/22/2011 11:39:00 AM
Well John this poem should have been placed higher.Congrats---kash
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Date: 4/22/2011 4:51:00 AM
Congrats John on your wonderful winning poem in HG's contest on tears my friend.. a touching and expressive emotion filled write luv.. enjoy your sweet victory with luv.. wishing u a most blessed and very Happy Easter celebration..
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Date: 4/22/2011 4:46:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of HG, john
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Date: 4/21/2011 11:00:00 PM
Dear Sir John, Thank-YOU For Supporting My Contest " Personify A Tear " Congratulations on YOUR 15th Place Win LOVE ALWAYS, YOUR Liege...HG
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Date: 4/21/2011 10:29:00 PM
A great personification of the ever ready tears. I liked this very much. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/8/2011 7:33:00 PM
Dear Sir John, I added the Sir because I Don't like Writing "Dear John Letters" I must Thank-YOU for Supporting my Contest "Personify A Tear" I ask YOU to Please Put YOUR Name at the Bottom of this Masterpiece I will check again in a couple of Days, No Name, No Placement Thanks Again. YOUR Liege, ALWAYS and FOREVER...HG
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Date: 3/30/2011 7:06:00 PM
Dear (Sir) John, I don't like writting "Dear John" Letters~ A masterpiece I Thank-YOU for Supporting my Contest I like the idea of this being an older POEM' to me it means YOU have Personified a tear before Congratulations, YOUR Liege ALWAYS and FOREVER LOVE...HG
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Date: 8/24/2010 7:45:00 AM
good write about soldiers and saints
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Date: 6/4/2010 3:48:00 AM
Dearest John: If my heart could speak it would tell you exactly how I feel about the annointing that the quill of God has placed in your hand to tell of truth. Please continue to be a tool utilized for the furtherance of poetryl. Warm Regards Ginna M. Taylor
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Date: 4/22/2010 5:05:00 PM
Enjoyed I like it--Funny one. i like the souldier tears idea.
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Date: 4/22/2010 3:35:00 PM
Touched my Heart...... Charma
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Date: 4/22/2010 9:37:00 AM
very very nice write and so true you can't stop them tears once they start you have no control weel done faleshia
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Date: 4/22/2010 9:14:00 AM
John. don't be so sad. Tell God for he listens to us. May all your prayers be answered and your tears wiped dry. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 4/21/2010 3:23:00 PM
Very nice poem, John...been there a few times myself...I believe in "wordless prayers"...even when we are unable to speak, God hears (and answers) our cries...Beautifully done, sir! - Tim
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Date: 4/20/2010 5:58:00 AM
Well done John l. you have such a deep anger written in here,, making it a goood read..Powerful read...p.d.
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Date: 4/17/2010 4:17:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today John you made me put my thinking cap on. I hope you are having a wonderful inspiration filled weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/17/2010 3:16:00 PM
Very nice, John iii. Courage and love...Thank God for the "Voluntary Army" within. Love to you. Dane Ann
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Date: 4/16/2010 9:38:00 PM
Well expressed thoughts. I enjoyed it
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Date: 4/16/2010 7:45:00 PM
great poem know one else better to talk to tell him about all our troubles
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Date: 4/16/2010 5:37:00 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one...I hope that you are not that sad..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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