Tears on Her Pillow

    deserted now

    the house of her youth
    hiding places

    for spiders
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 4:46 PM
brief but poignant and mysterious. Lovely poem. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
Greenhough Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 8:44 PM
A neglected place. The opportunistic spiders are always ready to move in. I enjoyed thee mystery of the girl who lived there.
Wolf Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 8:48 PM
Hilda, I really appreciate your spontaneous reaction to this little piece.
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