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Tears of Youth

I heard you, a girl of sixteen, giggle and laugh Though the fast moving time was unpleasant and tough. Inimitable youthful smile flashed from your heart Tinted your face crimson, a piece of charming art. In the air the sound of music wafted I heard Throbbing your vibrant heart singing as a lovebird. Immersed within its soft rhythm your sparkling eyes glanced Torrents of joy in the shadow of eyelids danced. It is a strange thing, love often grows flying wing To obscurity it drifts, ditched heart stops to sing. Insipid smile melts, silent tears begin to flow The sound of silence I would hear, I did not know. I froze the tear drop in sixteen year old sad eye To gleam it with sparkle of joy again, I’d try. _______________ August 27, 2022 Syllable count : 12 per line (HMS) Contest : Dot Your I's And Cross Your T's Sponsored by : Hilo Poet October 1, 2022 Contest : 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 15 Sponsored by : Mark Toney

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Date: 10/1/2022 5:59:00 PM
First love, broken heart...beautiful Subimal! Congratulations your win! Linda
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/1/2022 10:44:00 PM
Thank you, Linda for your kind visit and for liking the poem.
Date: 9/30/2022 3:39:00 PM
Congratulations for your win and I love the ending too :)
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Date: 10/1/2022 10:43:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi for your encouragement.
Date: 9/30/2022 2:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/1/2022 10:43:00 PM
Thank you, Sara.
Date: 9/30/2022 9:58:00 AM
Your poem is beautiful! I especially loved ~torrents of joy in the shadow of eyelids danced~
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/1/2022 10:42:00 PM
Thank you for your visit, Anne, and liking the poem.
Date: 9/30/2022 9:28:00 AM
Subimal, as always a delightful rendering, and compliments truly on your placement my friend, Aloha William
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/1/2022 10:41:00 PM
Thank you so much for the placement.

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