Tears of Youth

I heard you, a girl of sixteen, giggle and laugh
Though the fast moving time was unpleasant and tough.

Inimitable youthful smile flashed from your heart
Tinted your face crimson, a piece of charming art.

In the air the sound of music wafted I heard
Throbbing your vibrant heart singing as a lovebird.

Immersed within its soft rhythm your sparkling eyes glanced
Torrents of joy in the shadow of eyelids danced.

It is a strange thing, love often grows flying wing
To obscurity it drifts, ditched heart stops to sing.

Insipid smile melts, silent tears begin to flow 
The sound of silence I would hear, I did not know.

I froze the tear drop in sixteen year old sad eye
To gleam it with sparkle of joy again, I’d try.

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August 27, 2022
Syllable count : 12 per line (HMS)
Contest : Dot Your I's And Cross Your T's
Sponsored by : Hilo Poet 
October 1, 2022
Contest : 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 15
Sponsored by : Mark Toney
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Fowler Avatar
October 1, 2022 at 5:59 PM
First love, broken heart...beautiful Subimal! Congratulations your win! Linda
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 1, 2022 at 10:44 PM
Thank you, Linda for your kind visit and for liking the poem.
Sands Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 3:39 PM
Congratulations for your win and I love the ending too :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 1, 2022 at 10:43 PM
Thank you, Heidi for your encouragement.
Kendrick Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 2:06 PM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 1, 2022 at 10:43 PM
Thank you, Sara.
Peck Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 9:58 AM
Your poem is beautiful! I especially loved ~torrents of joy in the shadow of eyelids danced~
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 1, 2022 at 10:42 PM
Thank you for your visit, Anne, and liking the poem.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 9:28 AM
Subimal, as always a delightful rendering, and compliments truly on your placement my friend, Aloha William
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 1, 2022 at 10:41 PM
Thank you so much for the placement.
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