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Tears of the Father

a daughter of Heaven from the beginning of time was loved by the Father now Lucifer desired the daughter of Heaven whose love of the Father revealed the darkness of his soul from that darkness grew the revenge of hate as he glimpsed the love in her eyes for the creation in His image from the heavens he plotted the fall of man and watched as the daughter of Heaven fell into the arms of a son of the earth In the wafting hours before dawn as the cold of dark descends upon the earth the time for forbidden lovers to meet in a hidden glen as the son of the earth would drift into the slumber of bliss the daughter of Heaven as the first rays of sunlight would break in the dawn she would take flight in the form of a swan transforming in the misting ray’s of the early dawn to the daughter of heaven afar from the eyes of sons of the earth the disciples of Lucifer grew bold in their lust for the daughters of man and taught the forbidden arts to the sons of the earth and with the use of the bow the screams of a shattered heart echoed into the hollowed pillars of Heaven and the tears of the Father covered the Earth

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Date: 5/31/2016 12:36:00 AM
You really caught my attention on this - from the start to end. Nice concept, Alan. Keep it up.
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Alan L Boles
Date: 5/31/2016 8:04:00 PM
thank you, Moon Flower, the idea that only male Angel's would have been the only one's to have existed. Let alone been attracted to the children of man. And no female Angel's are mentioned in scripture. I decided to spin the story, and reveal love, lust and hate as well as loss.
Date: 5/25/2016 10:38:00 AM
Interesting story! Sad. Thanks for sharing.
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Alan L Boles
Date: 5/31/2016 7:53:00 PM
thank you, Becca
Date: 5/22/2016 8:00:00 PM
I have a good feeling she read this. Poems are So inspiring... Enjoyed this..linda
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Alan L Boles
Date: 5/31/2016 7:47:00 PM
thank you, Linda
Date: 5/22/2016 3:33:00 PM
awe, Alan, that's loud,,, love it. SKAT
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Alan L Boles
Date: 5/31/2016 7:46:00 PM
thank you, Skat A
Date: 5/22/2016 12:08:00 PM
Wowie! Powerful! Lots of strength you've chosen in your words... GREAT poem!
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Date: 5/22/2016 10:11:00 AM
Alan, well done... Linda
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Alan L Boles
Date: 5/22/2016 10:41:00 AM
Thank you, Poet Destroyer A

Book: Shattered Sighs