Tears of Sky

The air, thick with the promise of the coming downpour, held a peculiar aura. 
Not the sharp, acrid tang of the approaching storm, but a subtle, almost ethereal perfume. 

A dampness, a coolness, a hint of earth, of decaying leaves, of something ancient and comforting. 
It clung to the air, a fine, invisible mist, a silent prelude.

The impression, not a smell, but a feeling, whispered through the leaves, rustling in the branches, sighing through the reeds. 
A tremor of anticipation, a hushed expectancy.

The world held its breath. 
A moment of suspended animation. 

Then, a single drop, like a tear from the sky, traced a glistening path down a blade of grass. 
Another. Another. Another. Another. Another!

The rhythm quickened, a drumming on the roof.
A deluge.

And the impression changed. 
It deepened, becoming richer, more profound. 

Not just the earth, but the washed-clean stone of the riverbed, the dampened petals of wilting jasmine. 
The dampened asphalt had a peculiar, earthy sweetness.

A memory, fleeting and profound, of childhood afternoons spent in the garden, the relentless drip, drip, drip of the rain, the damp cool air against the skin. 
A child's quiet joy.

The presence of rain. 
It was more than an impression. 
It was a sigh of the earth, a whisper of the universe, a testament to life's relentless cycle of renewal.

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Date: 10/15/2024 6:27:00 PM
This is a lonely weather occurrence which you have formed into an exciting drama. I applaud your talents.
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Date: 10/15/2024 8:36:00 PM
Thanks, Hilda. Drama of life continues with tears!
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