Tears of Love

Tears of Love

As my teardrops fall
I really try 
to count it all

But there's so much
I can't find 
a number that is such

All I think of
is his glance and his smile

When he smiled and looked at me
the world through his eyes
I could see

I felt like paradise had open its gates
way in the clouds up above
and I knew I had fallen in love

But then, different ways
we both had to go
due to life
and its regular show

We are, so far apart
yet still he lies in my heart

As each teardrop falls, to forget him I try
but I hear his calls, softly saying
"I will wait for you
 I know you will come
 if our love is true"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/12/2009 3:37:00 PM
sweet write
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Date: 2/6/2009 12:13:00 PM
amazing. I think it would make a great song!
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Date: 1/22/2009 3:40:00 PM
This is a lovely and heartfelt write. Sweet and tender expression of love, Maryam. Excelent writing! Love, Robin
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Date: 1/18/2009 1:43:00 PM
another dream to add to the other dreams. JHL
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Date: 1/18/2009 10:11:00 AM
This is very beautiful. I still can't believe that you are that young..Great poemt of love...good to read you again young one.
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Date: 1/18/2009 9:04:00 AM
oh maryam, this is a beautiful poem! Very romantic!!!
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