Lamarcus Walton Poet Free verse

Tears of a Flower

The raindrops on a flower are still for a moment,
But the dew that rolls off of its petals fall, as do tears.
Beautiful is the woman who chooses to bloom into perfection.
Even through the storms and strong winds,
She bows in worship and gives her ALAHYM praise.
Withstanding the pressures that may come,
She lets go, and let YAHUAH!

Finally; no more hurt, no more pain.

The falling tears of a flower brings joy and strength after the rain.

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Matt Hunt May 17, 2011 at 1:44 PM Very good use of personification and nature. I liked this one. R.M.

Carol Sunshine Brown May 16, 2011 at 5:31 AM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Lamarcus. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Poet Destroyer A May 13, 2011 at 7:57 PM Lamarcus, rain and flowers are my addiction when it comes to nature,,, enjoyed,, the combination,,, Linda

Dr.Ram Mehta May 13, 2011 at 2:17 PM beautiful analogy, lamarcus. Carolyn Devonshire wrote to me about you, nice to read your lovely piece,

Sunflower Poetess May 13, 2011 at 4:31 AM Oh, Lamarcus, Such an informative verse about tears and God. Thanks for so much insight through your writing. I know what you say is true. Jesus truly heals broken hearts. Love Manyhaha

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 12, 2011 at 5:17 PM Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your elegant creative write tonight.. hope u have fun on P.S. as u continue to share with luv..

Diane Locksley May 12, 2011 at 1:27 PM Gee, this is even more incredible than the first poem you posted Lamarcus. I will try to remember this message the next time stress starts getting to me. Did you know your other poem just made the Hot Poems list? Look for the link to hot poems under the community heading and you can scroll down to find your poem. I hope you enjoy your time on Poetry Soup.

Carolyn Devonshire May 12, 2011 at 12:52 PM I knew there was something very special about you as soon as we spoke, Lamarcus. Your words about the power of faith touch my heart. This poem is so uplifting and provides inspiration for people who are struggling. We need only turn to God for comfort. Indeed, you have much talent! Best wishes, Carolyn

Wilma Neels May 12, 2011 at 12:26 PM Wow Lamarcus I really love this write of yours.. Truly inspiring.. Welcome to PS ;)