Tears of a Flower

The raindrops on a flower are still for a moment,
But the dew that rolls off of its petals fall, as do tears.
Beautiful is the woman who chooses to bloom into perfection.
Even through the storms and strong winds,
She bows in worship and gives her ALAHYM praise.
Withstanding the pressures that may come,
She lets go, and let YAHUAH!

Finally; no more hurt, no more pain.

The falling tears of a flower brings joy and strength after the rain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 5/17/2011 1:44:00 PM
Very good use of personification and nature. I liked this one. R.M.
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Date: 5/16/2011 5:31:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Lamarcus. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 5/13/2011 7:57:00 PM
Lamarcus, rain and flowers are my addiction when it comes to nature,,, enjoyed,, the combination,,, Linda
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Date: 5/13/2011 2:17:00 PM
beautiful analogy, lamarcus. Carolyn Devonshire wrote to me about you, nice to read your lovely piece,
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Date: 5/13/2011 4:31:00 AM
Oh, Lamarcus, Such an informative verse about tears and God. Thanks for so much insight through your writing. I know what you say is true. Jesus truly heals broken hearts. Love Manyhaha
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Date: 5/12/2011 5:17:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your elegant creative write tonight.. hope u have fun on P.S. as u continue to share with luv..
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Date: 5/12/2011 1:27:00 PM
Gee, this is even more incredible than the first poem you posted Lamarcus. I will try to remember this message the next time stress starts getting to me. Did you know your other poem just made the Hot Poems list? Look for the link to hot poems under the community heading and you can scroll down to find your poem. I hope you enjoy your time on Poetry Soup.
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Date: 5/12/2011 12:52:00 PM
I knew there was something very special about you as soon as we spoke, Lamarcus. Your words about the power of faith touch my heart. This poem is so uplifting and provides inspiration for people who are struggling. We need only turn to God for comfort. Indeed, you have much talent! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 5/12/2011 12:26:00 PM
Wow Lamarcus I really love this write of yours.. Truly inspiring.. Welcome to PS ;)
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